by Sandman8314
Your "story" was more clinical than factual and about as exciting as scrubbing the floor. No more of these, please.
"I was as innocent as a newborn lamb.
....
She got me alone and we began kissing"
Shouldn't there have been some emotions between there as a build-up?
Agree with the comment about "clinical".
This was a fully unexciting read.
Wow, sixty years ago to run across such a wild woman would have been an amazing thing. We've lost the fear and shame, which is good (IMO) but we also lost the insane excitement of doing something so taboo.