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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Suggested modifacation to the last paragraph.

Looking over at Janine, Sally announced that it was time for them to go home. As they all got up and walked out onto the patio Sally coyly smiles at Janine and takes hold of Greg's hand. She proceeded to unbutton her shirt, take it off and then turned around and threw it over her shoulder at her husband and Janine. As she stepped down from the veranda, Sally unwrapped and took off her skirt. Steve and Janine stared in silence at Sally as she walked completely naked next to Greg as she said "See ya tomorrow"

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I'm half of a married couple from sunny South Africa. After a long absence, I am back as I have some time on my hands to write again.

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