All Comments on 'No Accounting For Chaos Ch. 01'

I DO HOPE THAT THERE WILL BE MORE , AS THIS STORY SEEMS TO BE SO ENGROSSING THAT IT CANNOT BE A STAND ALONE

I'm enjoying the contrapuntal play between the philosophical discussion and the physical expression. No fast food story, this. Looking forward to the delicious continuation of Monty and Marcie's tale.

Took my breath away.

Having been a massage therapist at one point I enjoyed this story immensely as I often fantasized about this scenario with many of my female clients. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the series.