All Comments on 'No Longer Shy'

I can't believe the reality of your story! It is so hot! I envy you the ability to enjoy sex with both sexes.

Why did you stop so suddenly? You were going along so well. Aside from some proofreading slips, this was quite a nice story, and easily worth another page. I wish that you hadn't glossed over the rest of the evening, or maybe just have us listen as Jessie gave Jasmine the "blow by blow." You have a good style and handle dialogue realistically. I hope you have some more of this sort in your lineup. I'm off to check it out. Thanks.