All Comments on 'No Other Lover'

by JoshuaGlass

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kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 11 years ago
drops to knees....

*bowing.....IM NOT WORTHY!!! IM NOT WORTHY !!! I AM SCUM! !!

Such a scorching hot tale! Should i be embarassed that i am aroused a bit?

o_O

sincerelymaybesincerelymaybeover 11 years ago
Oh !

I read the first one and loved it VERY much. I was a little surprised to be interested in the blood play, hah ! Sexy .. Lol .. I haven't read this one yet, but that other comment there seems like I should wait to read this when I'm ready, LOL. I'll be back !

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I liked this story but not as much as the first chapter. Maybe if you had given us an idea of how long Ford and Makoto were together before the turn and some details about what led to Ford being gunned down, it might have seemed more complete.

sincerelymaybesincerelymaybeover 11 years ago
Oh, I'm Back !

Okay, so I'm barely awake; I woke up thinking about this story, haha. So I read it on my phone whilst grinning like mad the whole time, excited for the blood play. Them saying "Later" was [deliciously] not helping my mind either ! I love them in the limo, especially how that started. And for the sex, hell, I want fangs, even ! I'd be way into reading about their sex all day.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow

Despite the whole vampire thing going on.. This story and the previous version kept me smiling and grinning like mad at my phone. To me it's not blood play, not vampish.. This is love. Please write more!

canndcanndover 9 years ago

I loved these two characters. the only thing at all I'd have liked to see be different is for them to go after whoever shot him the second time. someone was after him. he must have known who. when they got dressed to go after this guy, I assumed it was the person who shot him and they'd find out who was after him. i can't imagine a big bad vamp would let that go unanswered. That's the only thing. the rest was excellent.

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