by podga
I come back to this story once a year or so and reread it and it's as special as it always is to me.
I really like seeing how their relationship changes over time. It is a great idea. I'd really like to see you end each chapter in the present. That's the only thing I can tell you I'd like to see different. The rest is great.
Your writing artfully expresses the every day dynamics of relationships. I find myself getting caught up in your words and the lives of your characters. I feel like I'm sitting right on the sidelines watching their lives play out just for me. Thank you, I really appreciate you and these wonderful stories.
P.S.-There is no remedy for love....unfortunately.
I'm really loving how you mirror the beginning and the end of their relationship. Well done.
How many parts will this be in total?