All Comments on 'No Shame Taken, Just Returned Ch. 02'

More like you deleted it because you didn't like the comments!

I read his original short story and the comments. This guy is more polite that I would ever be. So I'll translate it for some of you who don't get it.

Don't like the story? Write it yourself. Quit your bitchin'.(last part mine)

So by "discussion" you just mean restating the story in the same dry, boring way you did the first time. It still wasn't a loving wives story, and it still isn't worth posting in the dorm you did. "Flash story" is lit code for "I don't actually want to write a whole story, but I'd like the praise of commenters and I'm too pretentious to realize this is a porn site."

Some may call it a flash story and others an incomplete story. I considered it as very complete. It had plot and substance. Cheers!

Of what a flash story is or should be and your reasons for writing this particular flash story. My opinion? Some flash stories work better than others. Britease just wrote one about bringing a dog into his life. It was funny. This story was about a serious crime that had serious consequences. The short, funny story seems to work. The serious story without details, does not. I understood what was said. But in my opinion the story deserved far more information to make it a worthwhile read. No offense. I've liked a couple of your other stories. This just wasn't my cup of tea.

SMH!!!!!

For those that still don't get it, let them practice by reading Goldilocks and the three bears. Once they can understand that then maybe they can understand more adult writings.

Works for me.

You still need an editor!

Good explanations and

a great idea for a story.

The problem for me

is that the story is to big

to be a flash story.

Taking out the small town (?)

power element might have helped

it being a flash.

But then again that might not

have been enough :).

I didn't rate the flash story.

It'a a damn good idea,

but just didn't work for me.

The second part, the explanation,

gets top ratings from me.

I think all rapists should be castrated and then shot whether they be straight or gay. I was raped as a young boy and nobody did a damn thing to protect me

I was raped by blood uncles and then went into foster care where I was raped again. So yeah, this story resonated with me big time.

The first part was good. The 2nd part was neede after so many people made such inaccurate comments. Yes, the 3 weeks of suffering were still needed as the investigation was into the mayor and Chief of Police who were not part of the rapes.

Love the short story it was to the point like cliff notes

Your part 2 i really liked because you explaned you idea and points about the story and I like you view point

Keep writing your way

thanks

Carollyn

Nice to see a punishment dealt to corrupt people. Too often people with money/power get a free pass. Today a judgement of 83 M was awarded against a great example of that type of power and or big money. It will be interesting to see how they fare. My guess is a very flimsy "house of cards" will crumble this year.

I like flash stories. This is well done!