All Comments on 'No Turning Back'

????

The only question is, why?

I will explain the story, though I think it is better if the reader understands it on their own.

The whole story is a metaphor for exiting childhood using sexual imagery. All too often, we are pushed into growing up before we are ready; often, as in this case, peer pressure is one of those reasons. A girl losing her virginity for the first time will often feel like she has been put in the situation at the insistence or pressure by her friends, and actually go through with it at the hard-handed insistence of her partner.

If you read it and thought "WTH?", try again thinking about a girl unwittingly losing her virginity and/or more innocently, a girl being pushed into growing up. I understand that it is still a mediocre piece of writing, but it is not meant to be read on its face.

One it's isn't a mediocre tale. Two it was well written. My thing is you are asking us to think and comprehend your metaphorically charged tale beyond what are intentions are by being on this site. As ridiculous as this sounds, and by the way I am quite intelligent, dumb it down a little so we don't have to think too hard to get your meaning. Thanks.

Your follow-up commentary helped me understand the context of your story.

This was an excellent little allegory that certainly belongs here on Literotica.

Thank you for sharing it with us. Please keep on writing.

Brujay

Not because her white shoes will never be as white as before. I cry for the time wasted reading this story.