All Comments on 'None Other'

Amazing

I liked it and I hope you continue with this story.

I liked it too, I hope you add more chapters.

Very sexy, with just enough touches of humor.

Loved it!

Thanks for the comments everyone. Much appreciated.

this is surprisingly good. loved the writting style... i assume that you've done quite a bit of nen-erotic writting before. i hope you continue because you could just be one of my new favourites on this site.

excelent story

I adore the idea of lust and love at first sight, and people going with their gut and giving in to it. Hothothot.

GREAT STORY GREAT STORY GREAT STORY!!!!