by TMAJO
This remains the one story that draws me back to this site. It has everything that any reader can ask for: fascinating, layered characters, drama, lust, love and suspense, - and all for free! I'll be willing to read anything you write, so as always, I look forward to the next chapter. d4n.
This storyline is great and your writing is so visual. I can't wait for your next post!
PLEASE end the misery and submit the next chapter or end the story (but it is so darn good I'd hate to see it end)! I like your writing style, how it is extremely descriptive everywhere and not just the places you'd think the majority would pay the most attention to.
Please keep writting you got me hooked on this its great... well written felt like being in it for real...please write more
U Gota finish dis u cant leave a person hangn 4 real ....otherwise really good story