All Comments on 'Nosy Neighbor Ch. 03'

Enjoying the story. Author is logically melding sub-characters with major characters. I would appreciate more indepthdvelopment of the psychological and emotional aspects of the characters.

The only thing I've noticed is incorrect words or leaving words out. An easy way to correct that is to read what you have written backwards. Then, the errors stick out like a sore thumb. Great story though.

I didn't realize this was a creative writing class project. I thought that there story were really exciting. Looking forward for the rest of the series.

grammar and spelling were fine

great story

I loved the story but it was marred in places by poor grammar and spelling. With some polish, this could be an exceptional piece of writing.

One of the hottest stories ever!!!!!

keep them cummin

I somehow feel a buildup to a Kate happening, I hope. Keep up the good work.