All Comments on 'Not Just Another Night'

by Chicanita

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good for a quickie

good, sneaky, quick, and to the point. well done, but please write more, what else happened?! it's a bit too short for me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good Work

This is a good story. Where's the rest of it? Where are you gonna go with it? Please add to it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
rubbish

Poor grammar,poor plot, if this is the best you can do Chicanita don't bother.

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