by firstkiss
Why does she have to keep saying stuff about Adam?
He's Lilly's :@
This is so much more than any erotic short story..
it is definitely the makings of a novel! seriously think about publishing your work..
It was amazing! i can't get enough of your writing. hope the sequel comes soon.
You really should make this into a novel and get it published!
Just like everyone else. You write the most wonderful stories. I have to wonder why we still get to read them for free! This story is so wonderful and real, each character so different. The connection between Adam and Rhi, brilliant. Adam is the most remarkable character, can I have him next weekend? I'll give him back... Then I think I might like to spend some time with Joe, too...
Thanks for sharing your talent.
I just love this series and can't get wait for the next chapters. Thanks for sharing.
this story is going great, and i cant wait to read more
Seriously, I was getting worried you were on a writing hiatus...but you've offered yet another wonderful chapter to your masterpiece.
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The tales of the Tanner family and those close to them are wonderful...and with five siblings, there are lots of opportunities for more stories. Just a thought.
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Thanks for another great installment!
are we going to get stories for violet and her brothers as well?
i've never left a comment before.. i don't like to mess with the writer's mojo or what have you, but i just had to let you know i've been a long time reader of yours and i'm amazed and enthralled by your stories. Please keep writing them and i'll keep checking for installments. i love how you've managed to keep all the charactrs from 'not my type' into this new series. love adam and how true you are to his charecter. best of luck,in the future. sorry for the lack of capitalisation, my shift key is acting up.
-lmp
Still one of my favorite authors F.K. Feels like you have more writing time and it shows in what you write! Still with you my sweet you keep writing and I'll keep reading Dick!
a carbon copy of either Joe or Adam? I love the way this story is developing and I'm sure I've said it before but I'll say it again...you BETTER have a HEA for Joe and Rhi! :)
Another great chapter! Loving your writing! Love how Joe and Rhi's characters are developing. I think I've fallen in love with Joe! Cant wait for the next part! The only complaint I have is that I wish the chap's were longer! But thats only cause they are SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!
bless! its so sweet to see the familt together. adn to see and adama again with lilly just shows how their still in love. hope rhi knows wat shes going t o do that is to stay with joe.
I'm so happy you updated, I'm way to worried about how all this will turn out. Hope life offers you enough time to write!
Really glad to see another chapter; it's great, as always! :) I'm glad to see that you've addressed the issue of Rhi possibly changing too much. You brought out her independent nature again, and doing so with the help of Adam (another favorite) was a great idea! I love the Tanners & can't wait for more. I'm looking forward to Writer's Block, too! :) You're wonderful!
Wow...you are an amazing, gifted writer! I love this story and you have written it so well that I can actually feel Rhi's pain. And Joe.......OMG every man on earth should be Joe...or if not him Adam...thank you.