All Comments on 'Not so Innocent'

Good story,full of details. Found a couple of errors but they did not distract from the story line. Can't wait to read more.XOXOXO, Victoria

Good story, like the whole premise. it will keep your hand sticky.

That was hot!

Definatley turned me on. I loved the innocent facade Alex tried to maintain. Now I gotta go clean up...

Um... sorry but the story that I was referring to was "Not So Innocent" but I also liked "At The Laundry Mat'.

Rum

good story thanks

page 2 The site of it was too much for him and he couldn't tease her anymore

sight

Really awesome. I want more!