All Comments on 'Not Such a Private Show'

Very nice

Felt a little bit rushed.

Predictable gay 'Master'/slave relationship outcome, with few surprises, unfortunately!

loved the public humiliaion. Stripping him in the bar.

Thank you so much for writing this. One of my favorite fantasies is having a loving and gentle, yet undeniably assertive partner, and the Ben's character definitely embodies that. Also, you wrote the emotion so eloquently that I couldn't help but feel Andy's panic and humiliation and shame and lust as if it were my own. You're a fantastic writer!

IS OFFICIALLY ONE OF THE HOTTEST STORIES I VE EVER READ!

I keep returning to this story. More please

I'm still not into the pleasure through pain thing - but the story was really fucking hot!!

Keep on giving us boners ! Well done !

This is an amazing story--love it! Would love to see more one off stories like this from you.

Love to be the slave and part of me wants to be the master

Wow! Your story was awesome. I love how you not only included graphic descriptions of the sex, but you also emphasized the loving nature that exists in BDSM relationships. This story makes me want to try something similar. Not sure which role though since you made them both sound good.