by DG Hear
Beautiful and lovely way to mend a broken heart and unite two sisters separated by tragedy. Excellent work and wonderfully told. Thank you.
A masterpiece. Two rating scales of 5* each end to end. It is both a sad and a very heart warming story. I loved the spunk of Lexi and Alex as well as her southern accent. I was once invited to a pro football game by a family from the Deep South now living in NY and their daughter had this beautiful and soft accent. I did not see the game! All I wanted was to make their daughter speak. What a nice game!!!
I hope that they will have a little girl and call her Lexi
BJ
Sadly, Alex died the next Earth Day. Luckily for Tom, it turned out she was actually a triplet, and he set off on his search. One day he would get it right.
Love it. 5*****
I think the ending should have been, "On April 22, Earth Day, Alex and Tom welcomed their daughter into their family. And they called her Lexi"!!
A somewhat sad but heartwarming story, I loved when he talked about her accent...5*
I get so tired of all the stories of "cheating sluts" on this site. So many of them never suffer the consequences of their actions. This was just a beautiful story of loss and redemption.
My only complaint would be our hero being such a weepy little girl in every other paragraph. Come on, man up!
Why didn't the social services check to see if the twins had any relatives?.
Like every one else I believe the Johnson's should have at least met her and even been invited to the wedding. Being that the twins were connected spiritually Alex could give them comfort about Lexi.
Why weren't the Johnsons invited to the wedding?.It was bad manners not to,in essence they were her aunt and uncle.
It may be that the Johnson's took Lexi as she was 'available' rather than waiting for Alex who may have taken months to recover. My issue is that the twins were separated.
Good story, though I wish the time line was longer for them to get to know each other. That said, had Alex felt Tom via Lexi, it could taken up some of the slack. Further, Lexi did not seem to feel things via Alex or she never spoke of them so much.
a damn good story of love lost and found...the only thing that upsets me is people dying....I love the romance and the fantasy world created....don't need to be reminded of reality and every day worries...these stories are pure escapism for me....
I don't have much to say about this story except you are ONE HELL of a Romance writer. Thank you for a very enjoyable Love story.
It would be extremely fitting if they had their baby on Earth Day. Now I will no longer think Earth Day as some hippie thing, rather I will think about this story. Beautifully written.
DGH your stories are usually exceptionally well written, and believeable. This story is the same.
Loved this story. U should sell the rights to a movie company, it would make a hell of a movie.
There is actually a lot of research that has been done about this and you have worked the reported results into this story incredibly well -
None of us who is not a twin has a real clue how well it works or what could be affected by it - add the - well - supernatural aspect f communicating with a dead sibling and you made a very strong case for this being very real in its possibility.
It was a goo d story with essentially good people everywhere -
and have to be accepted,,,,TK U MLJ LV NV
A wonderful love story. Sometimes fate is cruel and sometimes it's joyful. This tale included both scenarios. Lost one sister and found her twin. I guess sometimes love conquers all.
However, this was a great story, sweet, romantic with some (just enough) sex. Thank you for writing this, DG. I am reading (or rereading) nearly all of the stories on your page. Good stuff!
it is still an unproven axiom, but not to some, TK U MLJ LV NV
If life could only be this perfect. I loved this story because from the sadness of losing one's love...he had a second chance at happiness with almost a clone of his first love. You wrote about something I have always felt, and that is...that a man or woman can love more than one person in a life time and often does. What matters is that the person you love...loves you back just as much. That is where these stories come from...so many tales of cheating wives that no longer love their husbands as much as they should or once did. It's nice to read a story that goes the way one wishes life and love should go... OldMarineVet
... this was another fine story in a long line. You're still the best.
This is a story and certain things have to happen certain ways. If anyone knows about government agencies, they would know it's possible that family services just ignored the first adoptive family.
This is the first story from this author. I'll be reading more. I do love a good romance and a happy ending. If I'm writing a story, it works the way I want it to and not necessarily how it would happen in real life.
I liked the story and enjoyed the fact that spelling and grammar were superb. I would encourage all authors to enlist the help of an editor before posting their stories.
Good story! I am married to an Identical twin sister and you hit the nail on the head when it comes to feelings, 'spiritual' communications, etc. Somehow, my wife--or her sister--always seem to know when the other needs a call or some sort of communication. It's not only cool, but also kind of spooky.
Anyway, I loved the story and for the other commenters, yes, it IS possible that a family adopted 1 sister and not the other. I have seen several stories about a family adopting 1 sister and the other going somewhere else, only to find each other years later.
Sadly I have to agree, adopt the healthy child, and let the one who cannot defend herself go through the system. The adoptive parents are wealthy, and easily could have taken on the "burden" of critically injured Alex. How could Lexi's adoptive parents be so very cruel? I guess it was karma that Lexi died, and her adoptive parents know what pain and suffering is.
Alex was blessed in the end eith a loving family, and Tom, but what could have happened.
DG, enjoyed the story overall, BUT I challenge you to write one for a child who is handicapped or critically hurt.
Knowing your stories, I am sure what happened to Alex slipped under your radar, because I cannot see you hurting an innocent like that.
Not at all what I expected. So a very well-to-do couple with no kids adopt just the healthy sister...really? I mean seriously, you mean they actually thought along these lines..."we only want to help the healthy child...let the taxpayers have the injured one." Fucking REALLY? The rest didn't matter.
I loved this story like many of your others.
I am always pleased when I see your name under "New".
As a matter of fact, this and others of your contribution would be just as pleasant to read without the "Erotic" label.
Twists, turns, and characters who are interesting. This DG story put a big smile upon my ugly countenance.
There are many stories written here but so many of them aren't complete. Great ending . So many pieces have a great story line but there is ending. great job olease keep writing.
DG, yet another excellent story flowed from your pen (Or word processor) a nice story line with people that you could believe might live right next door, another winner.
It started off quite tragically but after that it was just a delightful romance.
Twin stories are great and this was well done. Thanks for the great read.
Really warm and wonderful story DG. If this wasn't your best, it really was up there with them.
It's all in the crops, or livestock. If you're running a dairy herd, and wholesaling milk at a loss? Yes, one person, machinery and perhaps some contract harvesting and you're all set. If you're running a typical east coast diversified farm, not so. You might milk, make cheese or yogurt, fix fences and equipment, sell product, only to have to milk again. That's not counting eggs, chickens, pigs, fruits or veggies. Look at Joel Salatin's Polyface Farms as an example. If'n your doing all the work yourself? It's either done poorly - or you're soon to be a geriatric 30 year old.
And yet another that I'd love to see expanded into a full story.
I have read many of your stories, first on SOL and now here. They are always outstanding. You develop your characters well and the stories are very believeable. Look forward to many more.
this year lost my wife after 55 years we were in high school and dated 4 years before that. she was a farm girl and would rush the tractor to the barn when she saw the dust cloud of my car coming for a date. I hurt a lot but this gave me some good memories. thanks a lot, Just me.
That was a great story. My first one I have read on this site. Continue writing please.
Enjoyed the story, but as a farmer I do have to wonder how they could possibly mange to need that many people to run 500 acres. They'd be bored out of their minds and stone cold broke in my country. Obviously it might be different in the us than here though. We run 6000 acres here with one farmer and the occasional help for the big jobs, no way 3-4 families could be occupied and make a living off it either.
And I've just realised how ridiculous complaining about the size of a farm on a literotica story is and that I really should go to sleep...