All Comments on 'Nothing Happened'

I don't understand this story at all; the ending is vague & ambiguous at best; maybe the title says it best. "Nothing happened", that's the way the ending left me. Why don't you add a second chapter, or expand the ending, or whatever. Your stories are generally better resolved than this one.

The ending is very confusing. This needs an explanation or follow up.

somebody else was having sex with mark barbaras husband and it is probably June

It could be confusing at times but all in all i understood it, good story line and with that ending.... YOU HAVE TO PUT ANOTHER CHAPTER!

you have got to finish this. too much is left undone.

That was well thought out, made me smile and hard at the same time, well done..

I liked it also and I think your foreshadowing the Jane/Mark affair was well done. Still, a follow up story would be great as we find out what Barbara and he do about their cheating spouses and whether theirs had been a long-running affair.

more unfinished crap.

June is a stone cold bitch.

Cutting off from sex is a cunt thing to do. It shows no respect or honour. It is like sex with a wife is a reward for good behaviour. That stinks and is not the way a healthy relationship should be.

And the utter stupidity of getting completely unjustifiably mad that a naked man gets an erection around a naked woman. So the fuck what if it didn't happen before. Maybe he was just horny this time. Maybe it had been a while since he and the cunt had fucked.

Barbara had no business touching Kevin's dick. Kevin had no business letting her. They both should have walked away.

So they are cheating cunts. And that is everything, not nothing.

Then turns out that the stone cold bitch is cheating too.

They are all fucked up. Open up the marriage or get divorced. Because there is no fidelity or respect in any of them.

Argh!!!!

part 2

You have a habit of leaving stories unfinished. You ever start finishing your stories you will rock as an author.

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