All Comments on 'November'

I like the way you embraced halloween. its the time for all the wacky, creepy or just weird stories to come out. and you surely have given us some of those stories.

Great Story! Well thought out and especially well executed. Breezed right through it, and enjoyed every moment.

My favorite Halloween story ever!! Somehow you got a Lightfoot song a really intriguing Halloween character and a slutty wife all in the same story and still managed to squeeze in a couple of mustangs and a happy ending. Good stuff!

Enjoyed this as much as the last Stephen King book I read a few days ago. Really think you have a future as a published writer.

Would miss your stories of course.

Wife's thoughts, even at the end were of me me me me. Selfish to the very end. Have to pity her and real people like her though. "What does it profit a man........."

I, despite Stang giving me credit, didn't help edit this story. The story had already been edited by Stang's real editor when I read it. More than likely any mistakes or goofs u find were done when stang and I touched it up. I still think it's a great story though but I am a teensy bit biased.

your styff is getting sappier all the time, too bad

when you gave the name of the ship. Classic. Interesting story. Gordon Lightfoot would have been proud. lol

I'm got to read this one round the campfire one night to friends . Going to have leave the sexual part out if anyone's under 18 of course . I will start out thusly " A First rate scary story from stem to stern by Captain Stang' ....

but sill SS06 vintage. Excellent reading.

These last few ones are definitely worth publishing as a variety of "Loving Wives" short stories.

Thanks to the author and editor(s); Much appreciated reading.

Really would fit in nicely in a collection of ghost stories. The author is proving that he is talented.

SS06 HAS DONE AN EXCELLENT RENDITION OF THE SONG AND PUTTING SCENES TO THE WORDS. WHETHER IT IS TRUE OR NOT, ONLY THE TALES OF THE LAKES HOLD THE ANSWERS AND WE WHO HAVE THE QUESTIONS. TK U MLJ LV NV

It was really a "SS06-original".

Some of your more recent stories had your trademark in them, but did not give the true "SS06-feeling". This one was a little off your normal settings, but the feeling came up quite strongly. 5*

ss06 you have done it again! You are amazing Thank You

Excellent pun as the 'cherry on top' of a (long but) cute story.

It was good and entertaining! Well done and thanks for all your efforts SS06.

Magnificent read. The ballad brought to life. Time to meet November's sisters. Thank you!

as usual. Thanks for sharing!!!

Here are some thoughts for GL songs to build stories around:

"Cotton Jenny," "Early Morning Rain," "The Last Time I Saw Her," "Rainy Day People," "The Circle Is Small."

Miguel, the story is already outlined in the song.

I was upset that this story didn't run on Thursday like it was supposed to, I feel a lot better now. Thanks to all who shared their opinions good or bad. To the guy who suggested the songs below. Those are some of my favorite songs. But, I already did rainy day people. It was actually one of the first stories I wrote. I don't think I was good enough to do it justice. But it's there on my list. This Thursday for those of you who are interested and for those of you who always tell me to do a song that was written in the recent era. I'm doing a song by another one of my favorite bands, Evanescence, so this story will be darker and more emotional with a lot less gimmicks and a bit more realism. Of course the following week will probably be nutty. Anyway thanks so much to everyone who read this instead of watching the Lions crucify the broncos. SS06

Damn Stang, that was a really creepy story, the kind you tell around a camp fire on a cold October night.

I'd hate to have your nightmares, if this was one of your daydreams.

Well done Sir, you certainly have a way with words.

Thanks for the read

let me say that this is a great story. Really spectacular in every sense

You have a vivid imagination. You also tell a helluva story. Made by Americans, for Americans. :) Hang down your head Tom Dooley...

This one was not any better. Maybe it is your idea to push a story out once a week, and your getting burned out, but this story and your other one just didn't work. Might want to change it up and just have a loving wife story, and not any cheating wife, mmm... an actual story...

and the story.

Consider what you can do with his song Miguel.

Please

FOR NOW GOOD JOB GLAD YOUR FUNK IS LIFTING.

Writers do and those who can't leave comments.

Had fun reading it. Thanks!

I normally like your stories, but I really didn't like this one. I never did understand the November character.

I thought it was perhaps your best story so far! I thoroughly enjoyed it. You occasional references to "The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald" really did it for me. Thank you so much for the outstanding submission!

SS06 style was less humorous but the style was excellent to the story. I think the story belongs to the Sci Fi & Fantasy but for me it does not matter, because is hyper story.

After this SS06 could end the Circling the drain story as well.

Unexpected, scary and loving as well. I will share this story with friends and give Stang the credit! Thank you, Sir.

Damn I went right, left, right, right, then entered some weird place with this story. I loved it.

This only attest to the genius of this Author. To be able to grasp any concept and mold it into one of the most entertaining stories this site have ever seen. What a superb achievement!

Thank you Stang.

Now that was a fun story with great twists and the perfect ending for all concerned - heh-

Truly a wonderful story. So interesting with the several, uniquely tied together levels. Loved it.

not everything new is always best - but it was good - better than anything i ever did, but not as good as what you usually do. but a fun but a dickenesk type of read and frankly i did not care for the slut or even cliff or any of the characters. i felt nothing for them.

almost stopped reading after 1st page. You were confusing the characters, glad I came back and finished the story.It ended up being a good story.

Stang and his fearless editor MOTB can sure tell a tale. I hope there's a sequel involving John and his new girlfriend someday - another story to tell there. Excellent five-star story.

You have brought one of my favorite songs to life.

"I'm more afraid of what will happen if I make you cum too early," lol, priceless.

An interesting tale. Thanks.

I realize there was more going on here than sex, i.e. stealing his money, but why do so many of the wives here who want their sex at least occasionally a little rougher simply say that to their husbands instead of looking for it elsewhere?

And, yes, I realize there would be no story then, LOL!

"He pulled out his iPhone and called 911." Not his phone, or even his smartphone, but, by Asgard, his IPhone!

I liked this tale the first time I read it. More the second time. I've lived in the Land of Sky Blue Waters many moons ago. That Superior water is damn cold, summer or winter. Great writing and reading, SS6. Thank you. Cheers!

You made Gordon Lightfoot's song come alive with your fine story. Keep up with your tremendous creative output and hold us bench warmers in your thrall.

SS06, your creativity really came through on this one.

thanks for the entertainment.

and wonderment of beliefs. TK U MLJ LV NV

That was a very good read. Have my own story of witches in real life. Wish you well and thank you.

you have to go though a lot of rubbish with this author to find a good story but this one was well worth the effort. Not sure why so many of SS06's stories rate so high, must be all the woman haters reading, finely had a story were the woman wasn't a dumb unbelievable character. This one was a #5. TK

this author doesn't seem to write willing cuck stories. the law rewards cheaters and most of the time give the females what they want. cheaters should not be rewarded, male or female. and this writer doesn't. besides he always has a kick ass car in the stories. the ones i have read anyway. the stories writers like this put out are refreshing compared to the cuckold stories, wife sharing or hot wife ones that keep popping up.

thank you for the story i enjoyed reading it.

Over and over I read commenters calling SS06 A cuck for writing as he does or that those that like his stories are cucks.I think that some like to call him a cuck or a wimp because he doesn't go all Rambo, scorched earth on everyone involved,but that's not neccessary for a story to work. I don't see him as being a woman hater either,just a cheating spouse hater.Yes it usually the husband being cheated on that he writes about,but any creative writing class will try to tell you to write what you know,so a man will be more likely to write from the mans perspective. I like how the leading character,whether male or the occasional female comes out with a better romance then he/she had to start with,and would not put up with the bullshit that the cheater tried to spew out.He is one of the few LW writers that I can get into for that reason,Qhml and SW Mo Hermit are some others that I like as well for that reason.Others I just can't seem to get into their stories. If you don't like what Stangstar writes than don't read more of them,go on to another writer.That's what I do,and can do it without trying to be a keyboard warrior or troll either. While there is nothing wrong constructive criticism, hateful comments help nothing.

With key an euphemism.

Stang's stories are so highly rated because he is most imaginitive and innovative writer on this site. Add in - and its a big add in - most of his stories include a very wonderful romance.

I have never thought Mustang's had a pleasing body design...the Chevy SS no matter the model were superior to my eye...but I easily overlook and enjoy his passion.

Hilarious you state this story has real women for lead character - she is a spectre-she is the epitome of unreal.

Most likely Toni your wee key and ignorance as to how to fit it into a lock and engage the tumblers and let her release prevents you from satisfying her except by acquiescence to her demands.

My guess you a liberal elitists with more than one collegiate degree yet you remain uneducated. A person disagrees on a matter of policy with black govt official is automatically a racist. Propose a counter solution than hilly has made and person is mysoginist wife beater. Object to group of homosexual males disrupting a Catholic Sunday mass and person is homophobe.

What truly galls you though - along with swingerjoe, reedrichards, the carolinadreamer, and a few others is that you ascribe to a minority view.

You are incensed most people do not support swinging, cuckoldry - forced or accepted - and cheating. Having no logical arguments, a paltry audience you loudly and repeatedly clamor for attention and denigrate those who do not wish to engage in your chosen lifestyle.

Just to be gracious and demonstrate no uncivility on my part, next time your wife is in need of a huge penis with an email collection of unsolicited five star approval ratings, leave a comment on a story requesting ''The King of Control'' contact you.

I will contact you through your profile and supply my email. If the naked full body and exposed face photo of your wife is appealing to me, I will set up a meeting. Sorry no watching for you but will video your wife fainting in ecstacy.

Tell you what, because I feel sorry for your wife, no matter her looks or build I will bed her for a minimum of a weekend at luxury all-inclusive resort.

Any time is fine. I have more money than I and progeny can spend.

Will be awaiting your reply.

StangStar06 is a prolific writer with a marvelously varied number of themes and settings. He is one of the more entertaining authors on this site. If one doesn't like his subject matter, - simple! -- just don't read him!! 5stars.

SS06 has sometimes problem

with making his stories realistic.

But when he breaks the chains of reality,

he really shines.

Great story!

Top ratings from me.

Or two fellas rough fuck Ramona. Great story. Cant believe I had not read it before. Id like to score it 5 stars 29 times for each man on the Bob Maitland.

Clever, funny & a nice read. That's not unusual. You always give us lots of ideas to play wit.

Great story, even if it ends with a horrid, horrid pun.

This would make a good tv episode, for a supernatural type series or even a movie.

Clever. Well written. 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

When the waves get big and the wind blows hard, ground the boat on the shore and laugh in the bitches face. And then post this garbage in the Sci/Fi bullshit category.

1 star

Very original. The end confused me a bit but overall it was good!

Having grown up on the Windsor side of the Detroit River we were regaled with stories about the Lakes. Lightfoots song from the seventies brought focus to the tales with the sinking of the Edmund Fitzgerald. I loved this story for the intesting personification of November and the touch of First Nations culture. 5!

The actual lyric from the song is "the big ship and CREW was a bone to be chewed..."

Great story! I love the song, and the story of The Edmund Fitzgerald, and I loved the story about the witch November. Ramona won’t be missed, and hopefully Cliff and John have happy ever after.

Great story! Such an enjoyable read! Thank-you

Great line: "So sue me."

Nekem nem jött be ez a mese szerű történet ,nem mintha ne lenne jó írás,de nem érdekelnek a fikciók által kialakított történetek .Nekem ez max 3 csillag !

One of your better Halloween stories. Enjoyed it. 5 stars

The first concert I saw in Reno was Gordon Lightfoot .. I took a lady from the service with me as She had lost the money she had saved to see Gordon's Great Show .. I Had a Great time and the funniest part was the Lady did not know I was also in the service . The 2 sounds I hate the Most is made by a AK47 and Taps . Taps was played at both My Grandfathers and My Dads service .

Another good one, thanks!

People who don't know, this story sort of ties into another one, "Fur" - but for some reason the full version of "Fur" isn't on this website, so it seems pointless.