All Comments on 'Now!! Ch. 06'

who continue in ignorance today. Where was the mutual sharing and communication from before a wedding and the unrealistic expectations? It's similar to other LW authors using drinking and drunkenness as easy excuses for unfaithfulness or abuse between a couple. Stupidity hurts.

Erotica is what this site is all about and this was one erotic story. If we're looking for reality... OK, not so realistic, but great stuff. The question is which character did the reader identify with? I could identify with a couple. Great work Keep writing.

I fear for your marriage, you better tell you husband before he is raising another man's child unless of course that's what he wants.

Why does this story make me feel unclean?

I read plenty in my everyday life. With each item I choose to take on there is a gratification even if it is negative reinforcement. Your story was wonderful in the most positive of ways. I enjoy adult literature for mental stimulation. Thanks for putting this together for us.

11-2015

Only one comment:

David needs to die, and the more painfully the better.

The man's a fucking predator.

The writing was great - 5. The story itself was horrible -1. This is a story of 2 predators - Elliot and Sue. These are the type demons I would fear the most - devils in sheep's clothing. And Roslyn never teaching her husband how to satisfy her is truly sad. Not sure where Libby will wind up. Not much to say about willing cuckold and voyeur Glenn. Would be interesting if some other authors took up the mantle to continue the story. Lots of directions it could take.

Too bad this author disappeared after writing this story.