All Comments on 'Nowhere Man'

I really wanted to hate this story. But the husband's logic was so twisted and his motives so conflicted that it proved to be a delightful tale. I guess the line about "a turd in a punchbowl" had me laughing so hard that it carried me though till the end of the story.

Is the moral here that all salesmen are whores? Pimps? Certainly this is one extreme way to bring passion back to a marriage.

But your sense of humour caught me by surprise'' kinda like the Kryptonite story.

admit that you have a twisted sense of humor. Having been in middle sales as your man here; I always wondered what it took to close the deal.

I never thought to use my wife, but then we are still friends and lovers after more than 40 years together.

I really like your stories, keep up the great work.

George

I wanted to hate your story too, but that salesman really got me laughing. He needs to see a shrink pronto!

A slight change on the regular wimp cuckold story, the wife is a prostitute. At least he gets paid for watching another man fuck his wife. Is this supposed to be erotic?

... that was enjoyable and very funny.

Do you have a Liverpool connection (the Beatles are suggested, and the humour fits well)?

Either way, I must now read more of your work.

You got me. I expected the usual wimp/cuckold husband story and instead got the unusual pimp/master husband story. Good work!

My blood pressure was elevated reading this story. Thinking of some prick asking to fuck my wife to close the deal! He would have been picking his ass up off the floor more than once.

It was your story but I didn't enjoy it too much.

I would have like to see him come to his senses and start loving his wife like she needed to be loved! maybe setting her up to be overwelmed by him and then the both of them falling back in love after some serious mind provoking actions and events that he set in motion to get them out of their boring rut. And all in the name of love!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

Instead of his wife it should be his college age daughter. For a juicy sweet young thing the man would do business. The wife is over 40 years old. No one is going to do business for a dried up old hide.

I can't believe a fine writer like Harddaysknight wrote this piece of garbage. What a disappointment, the Ct. Yankee

lousy story. This was yours. Shame because you have talent.

As much as I tried to hate this story, as much as I tried to be offended, I couldn't because I was laughing too hard. HDK you DO crack me up.

This is great, now for the next chapter !

Some of the other authors have started to write this type of story, and now it seems you have joined in with the others. I can't find anything I like in this type of story myself, so my answer is simply not to read them. R.T.

If he'd recorded a video of their chat, he could have told Charlie "all the orders, or your boss gets this.

Sorry, I couldn't get into this.

and very amusing. Must have upset DW and the Burn The Bitch nuts though :)

*****

happier than hell. TK U MLJ LV NV

Did not like. I hope ch. 2 improves the tale.

Thia story sucks and you do as a writer!

Nice story. Very silly of course but entertaining and fun.

not really a cuck tale, given they were already emotionally separated. Thanks.

About a pimp and his whore. I hope they're happy with their arrangement.

Just not my cup of tea. But I recognize the talent in the writing. Three out of five.

Cheers Steve

Do I hate this for being a wimpy cuck story, or like it for freeing up their sex life?

I guess I'll have to see what Ch 2 provides!

cuck shit.

I didn't bother finishing it and usually don't bother scoring trash like this but I gave this a 1 in hopes it will discourage you from writing any more of this crap.

....and turnaround. Leaving more comments in part 2.

Nifty ,tongue-in-cheek story where the husband in a dying marriage offers his wife up in order to get a big business account. Turns hot she's a lot hotter than he thought and it energizes their sex life. Good stuff! 5

those humorless and cockless wannabe cuckies never get the joke - we are all sitting here laughing our asses off at them and the story!

Pure fantasy.

What a disgusting fucking story. He pimped out his WIFE! The mother of his KIDs!! I like sex as well as anybody and I’m ordinarily not judgmental about how others get their rocks off. But for me, this one was just over the top. He pimped out his WIFE! What a disgusting piece of shit.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I'm willing to give Ch. 2 a chance.

Even really good writers pop out a dud occasionally. And this one is a dud with a capital “D” !

Not what I would.expect from HDK at all. I guess even the greats have off days. Maybe he can rescue it with chapter two.

5 stars.

I was surprised by this nasty story. It doesn't feel or read like a HDK story. The characters are all nasty, unlikable people and the outcome was just unbelievable.

1 star

With two duds in a row? Signed: BTW

It appears as though the readers were looking for some kind of morality play. I think they missed the point. It is a comedy people! Get a grip. It is very funny. 5 Star Rating.

LOL

Three extremely unpleasant people. I guess they deserve each other.

I always wonder why anybody marries in these stories as they all seem to hate each other and certainly don’t have any respect or love one another.

Good to find your place in life.

Straight to DIVORCE court!!!!

I would like to buy Charlie’s seduction video!

5*

Ah c'mon, Charlie has the old thick ten inch cock and lasts for hours...

Dreadful! Absolutely HDK's worst offering by a country mile.

Absolute crap, hated it.

Estupido!

Well written piece of nonsense.

What an absolute asshole he is.

Can’t appreciate sharing a wife. 1 star.

Bill S.

Fkin moron

Regardless of his situation, he's nothing but a pimp using his wife. Doesn't seem conducive to a great relationship.

A waste of my time⭐️

BRILLIANT ! I can't believe that most LW and Literotica readers don't love this concept. It was presented so realistically and applies in more and more marketing situations where budgets are tight on the corporate side and on the family side too. The kids are grown, life is boring for everyone. What is holding them back? This is just sex - and this time that is not a cruel joke, but is a plus for both sides. Damn it, we do need a vacation too and the reclaiming sex would never exist without the business deal. My vote is 5 + 5 - one for the husband and one for the wife.