by windstormy
This is excellent wonderful storyline with just the right amo0unt of detail and enough suspens leaving me for more
Bette
You know I loved it...I can't wait to see what everyone thinks of this one. I will be back to check it out again. NymzanSusauren
Story sounds good and I gave it a 5. Josh seems like a troubled character and his predicament seems hopeless at the moment. Language in some places is a bit iffy but for me it didn't detract from the story being really good. Can't wait to read what happens next. Don't make me wait too long, the suspense is killing me! lol xxx
The story is thrilling and exciting and im not even male. So in conclusion: Very well written!