All Comments on 'Nurse Cindy'

This was a good story line, but you need an editor badly!! If the story had been edited correctly, it would have been an excellent read!! Very horny story, and one that would have gotten an H from everyone, if it had been proofread and edited.

No redeeming qualities whatsoever. Utter garbage from start to finish. How old are you - 12?

The word is "mAssage" !!! 3 times you wrote that!

Please I want more. I gave you 5 stars but i would gladly give you more if you keep this story going.

I hope they didn't discourage you too much, this has a lot of potential. Hopefully you write some more.