by magmaman
Told through the eyes of the one who does other people's women. Will there be a lot of noise from the BTB crowd. I was amazed at the time and energy that went into developing a false image of Tia..
Probably not as erotic as erotic can get!
(The Devil made me do it!)
The cuckold has seldom been discussed with more respect on this site, by someone who isn't one. You left it right where I remain, completely puzzled by the behavior. On a side note, I work with the Wounded Warriors. Their wives are the salt of the earth, living a life they did not sign up for and doing it with courage, selflessness and the truest form of love. I get very defensive of them when faced with stories that characterize them in lesser terms. You recovered by revealing them as frauds, but I was worried there for awhile.
Decent story but I must be jaded. Role playing Is so de rigueur in that plane of existence. She pretended to be a writer. Can a non- writer fake creativity in that area to another rexpert in that field?
To me, this narrator was a whole lot less intelligent then the author & that disconnect took the fine edge that is usually to be found on MGM's story. Was thus story a disaster ? No way ! Yet still ....
Writing about a man who object is to cuckold other men for a story is not a subject to be proud of writing. You are way better than this tale. Carry on.
The odds a couple being as deceptive as were Tia and Tom would allow a stranger they intended to ghost after one encounter to know where they actually lived are zero.
I liked it but can’t tell you why, in one respect it felt really good but in another respect it was bad, it was a steady paced story but not that much of a character build up, and the descriptions were basic
I have trouble giving this a rating because I have trouble how I feel about it, in one respect I like it in another I don’t like it, the characters are odd, the descriptions are basic, the plot debatable