All Comments on 'Oddball Ch. 05'

i swear if you kill Mary i'll hunt you down! LOL hurry up with net story and make her better!

csdII

Please don't kill Mary!!

interesting story but im so sure about the whole bi thing. im not saying i care if someone is gay but i do thinks its kinda fucked up that mary is dating tank but then also sleeping with britney, and britneys doing the same thing with oscar. the two timing thing is uncool, even if the guys know.

I kind of agree with the previous commenter. I love the characters you've created, and the storyline is awesome. But I really do believe that the whole bi thing with the girls actually diminishes the effect of the whole tale. Sorry, but that's the way I see it and I'm sure I'm not alone. Don't get me wrong I think it's hot, but I believe we're losing a lot of depth because of it.

I have been coming here for years reading the stories and have never once left a comment..until now. I check for new stories in this series even after the new one has just been released. I am hooked on the story and the characters. Please keep up the good work. Please.

P.s. I'd like to see where the "Bi thing" is going, but if you kill off Mary.............................

This is one of the best stories I've read on Lit

You sure like hurting your characters, don't you?

(This is not a criticism, merely an observation. :)

One is ok, how many now, maybe 10?

Certainly ends story lines easily

Chilley

You're awfully mean to your characters and readers!

at first the bi thing was ok but it takes away the story of Tank and Mary. i feel like we get more of her and britney rather than Thomas. I love the story except for the infidelity going on with both girls to their respective partners.