All Comments on 'Oddball Ch. 07b'

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LovelyLvs over 11 years ago

great chapter

lot's of cuteness! go tiffany!!

talldarkfellow almost 11 years ago

Good story, but a little too soapy.

I liked most of it.

Except: Barry, the stuttering geeky virgin suddenly become an assertive, clear-speaking alpha male and kicks Tiffany, the hot blonde cheerleader, to the curb because she's self-absorbed while TAKING HIS VIRGINITY??? That puts this story into the sci-fi/fantasy category.

At that age and level of experience, he wouldn't have cared if she was doing her nails, juggling or reciting the fricking Gettysburg Address, as long as she kept working her hips.

goodwillmagic over 10 years ago

Perfect Christmas Present

Great ending!

"I'm getting him a thesaurus for Christmas," Melissa decided.

"And I thought you loved me," Margaret laughed.

Laughed so hard accidently hit my injured shoulder.

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