All Comments on 'Of Heaven and Hell, My Side Ch. 01'

A great fan I have read and reread all of your stories. Looking forward to more.

I don't know what you were worried about, I thought it was done very tastefully so far, the rest will take care of itself. Thank You.

Peter

Better than his side. Can't wait for the rest.

As you say Baron, something completely different for you, but congratulations on a well thought out story line with a pair of strong well defined central figures and a good supporting cast. Waiting for the next part.

This is an excellent counterpoint to the male's side of the side. I can't wait for you to finish it! Please do!

I hope you will be able to finish it at some point in time. If not, the point of consummation would not be a bad stopping point. Great story - Five Stars!

Please! Bring us the rest of the story.

PLEASE! The rest of her story.

Didn't take his meds !

Please finish the story. You are a good writer, we need her whole side of the story. What happened to her after she left St Louis until she met up with him at the end? Inquiring minds need to know the whole story. :-)

Where's Ch2. I feel sorry for all of you who prefer the land of negative subjectivity.

Please finish the story.

Well? We're waiting for the rest. Come on lets complete this great story.

Maybe after that you could go on to some more nun falling in love stories. :)

But from a different perspective

Boring and talentless. Is English your second language ? "1*" !

This continuation is really a rewrite from Carol's perspective. But it mostly retraces the previous story to such detail that it is boring and tedious. I keep saying to myself, we already know this; we already read this. So it adds nothing new of significance, and detracts from the previous series, which was great. I will withhold rating until I see what you are really trying to achieve here, and if you succeed.

I gave you a "5" and "favorited" you and the story but:

1. What kind of a nun jumps into bed with first guy who smiles at her, and

2. If she is as hot as described, he wouldn't have been the first to make a pass at her.

I came up with these after thinking about it overnight. But at the time I was very much enjoying the story. You did a great a job. It is fiction afterall

So far so good. I know the enviroment that Nuns function in has drastically changed over the last fifty years. How much it has changed I don't know, so I can't judge how realistic this story is. However, it is an entertaining read.

A lovely addition to this story! Thank you!

This side of the story makes the whole story complete.

Well done. 5 stars