All Comments on 'Of Heaven and Hell, My Side Ch. 03'

Will there be more? This is great! It's time for her to meet the family. As far as the benedictines go...who knows. You're doing fine. You got the priests right. I remember some of them are just fine, but some could be real pricks.

Was really good.

5*

Thanks for writing.

I have been waiting for the continuation of this story. You have a good grasp of the Catholic religion and have treated the whole story with grace.

I love it and keep writing it. There's more to be told when they meet the parents on both sides.

Her going silent for a month and keeping him in the dark made no sense. Her failure to immediately contact him after she came out of the retreat made no sense. Did they lock her in her room? Her leaving the Tribunal not knowing where she was going, carry his child, thinking of him as the love of her life? The contrived meeting with the nuns at the mall? All very sloppy, contrived, and lame. Actually, stupid and somewhat insulting to your readers and fans.

Just didn't add that much. But thanks for the effort.

Anxiously waiting for chapter 4

"1*" !

Pleeeze! We need the next chapter. This is a great story, and you are probably the best writer on literotica.

Waiting for chapter 4.

PLEASE! Chapter 4.

Are you going to write the next chapter?

We need chapter 4. PLEASE!

A romance story with a nun. I like them. I wish there were more.

I hope you can continue this story soon. Thanks for sharing.

It's time to meet the parents. Let's go, we're late. This is a great story, from both sides. Well written.

Time for chapter 4

Can't leave this without the meet the parents scene.

Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha..............

It was a good story, however all the typos were very distracting and need to be fixed.

To this point I have found this tale to be an entertaining story. However, it is definitely an incomplete story that needs at lest one more chapter to complete it. The way chapter three ends just leaves the reader hanging.

We're still waiting for chapter 4. PLEASE!!!!!!!

Please add chapter 4. PLEASE!

I'm very happy that you added this chapter, it helped out greatly to close his part of the story. I still would like to read about them meeting his parents..;) Thank you for sharing this with us!

Well, it's going on five years since chapter 3 was written. It looks like there will not be a final chapter. Very disappointing.

I really enjoyed this story, but please could you add the final chapter, please.

I know how the story ends but I really want more! I wanna read the introduction to the family, the wedding, and even the birth of the first child. I became so invested in this story and NEED more!

Where as this was an excellent story, the ending was incomplete as it did not contain the dinner at his parents house, the wedding and the children as was shown in part 2 of the original story. I had hoped that this time around with her telling her side of the story it would be complete, yet it was not. Seeing how long it has been since this was published and that there has been no activity from this author since 11/20/14, I suspect that either something has happened to this gifted author or the anons with their nasty comments have driven him off. At any rate this was a wonderful tale and I will give a well deserved 5+++ stars. (Note: If the author is still reading the comments, a 4th chapter and conclusion to this wonderful love story would be wonderful and appreciate by your readers)

Where as this was an excellent story, the ending was incomplete as it did not contain the dinner at his parents house, the wedding and the children as was shown in part 2 of the original story. I had hoped that this time around with her telling her side of the story it would be complete, yet it was not. Seeing how long it has been since this was published and that there has been no activity from this author since 11/20/14, I suspect that either something has happened to this gifted author or the anons with their nasty comments have driven him off. At any rate this was a wonderful tale and I will give a well deserved 5+++ stars. (Note: If the author is still reading the comments, a 4th chapter and conclusion to this wonderful love story would be wonderful and appreciate by your readers)

Please, someone continue this series. Carol is going to be a mommy, unofficially she's a wife, and truly loves her student/husband!