All Comments on 'Of Hope Lost and Found Ch. 02'

Anothet great chapter! Keep it coming, best of luck!

The tepid enthusiasm for her relationship with Glen leaves me with a sense of foreboding for their future. If that was your intent, well done. I am still disappointed that Dottie seems to plan her future around men. I would recommend she finish college then move on to law school. Then think about finding a mate. The plot device that she needs Glen's money for schooling is weak, since there are so many grants, scholarships, and programs for intelligent aspiring women. My test of Glen's love for Dottie will be how he assists her in reaching her full potential, personally and professionally.

I am withholding my rating until I see if you are just spoofing us again, like you did with James. If Glen turns to shit too that would be more preposterous character crafting.