All Comments on 'Of Mice and Men Ch. 04'

by Gweall

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

this is awesome! i don't want to rush the story but i wanna know what happens! hurry, but do it slowly lol

chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
phobias

Sorry, I found the pacing of the actions in the chapter completely unbelievable. Ethan exploding and leaving Carey alone on the street was great. You really caught Carey's panic moment well. His change from his first group therapy session was almost laughable. I liked the last part of the chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The subtle RENT reference...

was amusing but totally distracting! Even so, I like this story the best of all your infected ones!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Not working for me. Ethan isn't likable, so who cares what happens to him?

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