All Comments on 'Of Romance Anew Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
excellent start!

Hope to see this story continue. It's a great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
a great story, and...

anyone notice that the gifted author is 18 to 22 years old? So maybe still a late teenager. I'm sure Mr. E was hard when he wrote this and that he shot a good healthy load of his own at the end. I'm just hoping that the lad's been getting his own father's fat veiny daddy-dick in every hole he wants it and that dad's been spurting some of the same sperm that made him down E's throat and up his cute boyish butt.

Ocean22Ocean22almost 10 years ago
Omfg

So hot, i hope ch 2 comes soon!

AlexDancesAlexDancesover 3 years ago
Wonderful story

I love how the kid has such a great friend in Alice. If only everyone had an Alice in their lives especially when it comes to always feeling accepted in life. That awkward hand hand shake brought back memories as I had one with my own dad when I was younger. Lol

I am very much looking forward to the next chapter in this story!

Playful4BearPlayful4Bearover 3 years ago
Excellent

I have read it twice and the author is excellent in his descriptive narrative.

Truly gifted.

I'm disappointed for not finding a continuation.

You are.truly a gifted writer... don't abandoned it!!

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