All Comments on 'Off the Richter Scale'

Loved the story. Always enjoy a good May/December "romance". Excellent writing and loved the build-up. Had my heart pumping toward the end. Would love to have had something else pumping but made the mistake of reading this at work, lol.

I enjoyed your story, especially the ending which had the perfect level of tension.

Pete

Love this story. I noticed this is your first submission. Please don't let it be your last. You have good skills.

One of the best submissions I've read. Hard to believe it's your first!

I really enjoyed this story, keep up the great work!

Great read.

But I just have to know: WHAT FLAVOR WAS THE ICE CREAM ??

I wonder if my local grocer carries it ??

A damn fine read and you are one helluva writer! Please write more soon!

You have to continue this story - it has tons of potential.

Are you an experienced writer? I agree about this being your first story. The characterization and dialog were truly superior

Thank you for the comments. I'm not a professionally trained writer, I just write for the fun of it. I don't post many stories here as I write mostly for my boyfriend and he doesn't want to share! I'm glad you all enjoyed yourselves. :)

I love sitter stories and this one was great. the ice cream was a nice touch, as was the tension at the climax of the story. well done.

1] His comment about play with the boy isn't/shouldn't be a question.

2] Where is the next story/stories of the Richters' property?!

This was an incredibly HOT story! I thoroughly enjoyed your story and wish you were still submitting your creations. Isn't it cool that years after you shared, readers are still enjoying your work...and encouraging you to share again. (Hint, Hint). LOL

Beccy? It's Becky.

He put his hand on his boss's thigh?

And his wife kept a sexy outfit in the kitchen cupboard?

And no woman wants ice cream in their pussy. This was all silly.