All Comments on 'Office Visit'

Great story, very well written, I love the attention to detail. looking forward to reading more.

Great and for me an unusual set-up, but one I have lusted for. For me the key to a great erotic story is the pace and detail the author can manage. We all know or hope we know where the story is heading (all puns in) but how one gets their and how the participants react and feel is what makes a great story great: the slowly arriving at the pussy and the hesitation or delay in final achievment is for me what most of these tales are about.

This one is a winner.

Quite good.

Fun little story..but what made it for me was her proper adult woman's lush ebony muffin-none of the 10 yo's smooth bald vulvas....