All Comments on 'Ogres and Ogresses Ch. 12'

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jazz1190jazz1190over 11 years ago

Please dont wait a whole month next time for the next chapter... this is getting to be too good. She finally is actting as if she has feeling and she not perfect as she thinks. I hope the next chapter she takes all the weapon he fix away from and let them make some more of their own.. so she can show them that her job is not easy. I hope kail doesnt really go away but to let her think about what she really wants. She doesnt kno how to let some1 love her or take care of her let her feel like a woman. She was tryn to hide how she feels but for no one to really notice is sad. She fought hard to get where she is now but she has nevr non what true happiness is othr then from the child. Who is love and adores as her own. She wants happiness but she really dont know what true happiness is. So now she is on an emotional rollacoster. Cant wait to read next chapter. I hope in the next chaptr she goes aftr what she wants or off of her needs and not feel bad for sayn she wants and needs someone or someething. Cant wait to read the next chapr

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Absolutely wonderful, Been trying to read more often and first thing I couldn't stop reading in a long time. First one by you I've read, thank you.

Can't believe how invested in the characters I am

sirraliasirraliaover 11 years ago

Loved it. I don't care if Zyra was wrong for denying Kail. He should've waited. I think you should bring back Rell and make Kail grovel. Lol. Team Zyra!!!

elspethsheynaelspethsheynaover 11 years ago

I really like the longer installment. I love the way you're headed with it. I can't wait until everything comes to a head and you reach the climax.

ha ha i know bad puns but i couldn't resist. Anyways thanks for another great chapter and don't make us wait too long.

stubborn_dreamerstubborn_dreamerover 11 years agoAuthor
Hey Guys! It's Stubborn!

Thank you for all your support and kind words.

I can see you really are invested in this story! It makes me excited when I see how much you are, and it helps me to write. Sorry about the delay. Since it usually takes me 1-2 weeks to get the 2 pgs done and this was 5 pgs...well you get the point. I won't make you wait more than 2 weeks max now that I get the pace of the longer chapter. I made a promise that when things start getting heavy I will not separate the heavy bits. (ho ho ^_^)

As for Zyra I am super happy that you are all Team Zyra, as I haven't really given an other fighter to contend with. I dunno if I'd be happy if you were all like, "TEAM...Caligula!"

Yeah no, the man's a freak XD.

So just wanted to say thanks and that I should be releasing

Chapter 13: "Breaking Point," soon.

Love you GUYS and GALS.

Sincerely, -Stubborn (P.S. I love your guesses, but you're going to be stunned with where I'm going XD)

JustFourFunJustFourFunover 11 years ago
Hoping for more...

I've been enjoying your story and characters. I know that when I find a story I'd read even without the erotic components, that it is good (and a talented story teller). Please continue ... :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
mzmagicbeauty..

Omg its gettin so good i actually wanted to cry when her village went against her and i would have slapped the taste out of ginger for what she did

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Well this is sad.

I'm finding myself relating to Kail way too much right now. Except without the obligatory happy ending. Which is making me feel strange about this story. Despite that, it's very good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loving this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wow

I almost got tears when I read how alone and dejected zyra felt. I can on some level emphasize with her you are a great writer.

ValkyrValkyrover 9 years ago
oh well

It madre me CRY

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