All Comments on 'Oh Teacher, My Teacher Ch. 04'

Fine writing, nice people, plenty of sex. What more could you want! But can everything always be positive?

That was another fabulous Chapter that you wrote about Rick and Astrid. I like how you have developed their characters over the first four chapters and how they have come together so quickly and how the characters of the parents have developed. I like how in this chapter you were able to bring Astrid and Crystal together and they were able to put the past behind them and become friends because of Rick.

I can hardly wait to see what happens in the next chapter with the marriage ceremony.

I didn't vote on any previous chapters,they all continued to build on one another.Excellent story.

...I get the feeling that there is a "BUT" in all this. Maybe because she sprang the 'heiress' thing on him, maybe because there was a 'look' between Crystal & her step-mom, maybe it's because things can't be right all the time. Maybe because I don't think that things can go his way all the time. Trust me, his disillusionment is coming. It may not be earthshaking but it will come.

Please say its not the end

The WHY? was never answered by Astrid. WHY she chose Rick was never clearly answered by the author<p>Then the twist Astrid a wealthy girl, having problem with her stepmom. I mean this story was suppose to be about Astrid teaching Rick sexual things, right?<p/> <p>This story is off track & I'd like to ask the author -- WHY Astrid chose Rick?<p/>

I hope not, but this IS "Loving Wives", and I see we're only halfway through the story, I hope there isn't Trouble in Paradise!

but the background remains fuzzy, TK U MLJ LV NV

Too soon but what do I know?