All Comments on 'Ohana Ch. 02'

I left the first comment on the opening chapter of this story. I didn't make it clear I gave that chapter five stars, so I'm correcting that oversight now. I'm also giving this chapter five stars.

This is one of the more memorable stories I've read on this site.

Nicely told story

Nicely written

What a great story! Very well written, lots of feelings and love, It was a two-tissue story,, Maybe a third one will be needed.

Thank you for this great reading experience.

DV

Have read hundreds of stories on the site. I tend to read 4.40 rated and higher. This is one of the very best. While these 2 chapters have all of the elements of well crafted writing, it also has that rare quality of a beautiful story idea. Thanks jehoram, for sharing it.

RiverGuy

I find this an excellent story and well executed. I had tears when Miguel never found her again.

I had tears again when Mike and Leilani met.

I know a story is a good one when I am sitting in the story and not just reading it. Very high quality writing.

I wandered over here after reading a comment you made on the Authors Forum about why you write and the deeper drive that forms what you write. I felt like, based on what you said there, I would appreciate your work. Indeed I did, and found this two part story to be engaging, erotic and incorporating a meaningful message. Not only did it reach higher than the bulk of stories published here, it was also well edited, included a unique story-line and left me feeling very satisfied. Well done 'jehorram' !