All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

OUTSTANDING STORY i LOVED IT. PLEASE CONTINUE AS IT KEPT ME ON EDGE THE WHOLE WAY AND WAS MASTERLY WRITTEN........

THANK YOU FOR A WONDERFUL STORY......

That story was amazing...it was so heart felt, and beautiful...I only wish that could happen for me, but my mom would never, and i don't have a sister.

Anyway, awesome story!!!

The story was so beautifully written and I couldnt stop reading it.

What talent!

Very good, though it could have used a more pronounced emphasis on the "No! No! No!.... Yes! Yes! Yes!" aspect of the story, as far as my interests go.

Jim is a masterful writer and has you hanging on his words.I didnt think he could surpass Daddy I wispered ......but its close.

Cant wait for more Keep it up JIM

This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Probably gonna be one of my personal favorites. I have read twice already and I'm looking forward to reading it againa and again. I liked the character interaction and the just the overall writing. Sexy and fun. Thanks for writing a great and enjoyable story.

Don't stop now.

I loved it! Your words were most sensual. Keep up the great work!!!

great work, loved it. 7 outta 5 kept me hard

You write with such seemingly effortless flow that it kept me entranced throught the whole story...kudos.

A few puncuation issues, but all in all I enjoyed this naughty read. Good job. ~ Red

Well written. Could've used a bit of tension though between the girlfriend and her mother and Bobby's mother and sister. Otherwise, not bad, not bad at all.

woa what an amazing story plot. this is the first story i actualy like. it keeps the reader aroused from start to end. love how they married themselves. seems very realistic. keep it up.

Good story. Loved the bit when both mum & his sister got pregnant. Write some more like this with both women again getting put in the family way. Off to read more of your stories - hope I can find another where both girls are made pregnant

Thanks,

Julie

it was rolling all the way to the end nice job

he writes some of the most twistedly funny incest stories; in fact, he should be crowned as being "the best" when it comes to wrting the most flippant, facetious, yet seemingly inncoently "realistic" incest stories....

sometimes it is somewhat sad, sometimes it is funny, sometimes look serious, but all the time too they have twisted sense of "white noise" sureal reality to them.

Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic! A nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!

Bravo!" This was an extremely erotic and nicely written story-line. Even for an incest story! Great pace of lust to keep the reader continuously arroused!

I found this an extremely well written, excellent story. Just the right length and pace and wonderfully erotic. Off now to read your other submissions.

Thanks nice story. Keep going

man this story was fkn crazyy.... loved the son fucking the older sis then the mom. Maddd storyy and the longer the story the betta.

keep em cumin'.. (literally :) )

I'm not of a fan of incest but your story is really delious you have an A+ and thumbs up from me. Everything was perfect. Well done my boy.

Really nice family fuck story.Son fuck both elder sis and mom,

pregnated them and made them his wife.Fucking mom is nicely described.

this has got to be one of the best I have ever read and I thank you for takeing the time to write it.

Don't read many incest stories. Not really my thing. But this was really nicely put together: real love, not just lust.

A well thought out, nicely written story. Very erotic, and I liked the ending, too. The dialog was a little stilted and unrealistidc once in a while, but that didn't keep me from enjoying the story. Keep up the good work.

This was erally well written. As a retired clergy and psychologist, I appreciate the excellent use of language. Very stmulating and moving. loved it a lot. Reader in DE

I CANT SAY HOW GOOD THIS STORY WAS. IT HAD THE RIGHT PACE AND EVERYTHING. KEEP IT GOIN. SHOULD HAVE ANOHTER CHAPTER OR TWO

THIS WAS THE VERY BEST STORY THAT I HAD EVER READ ON THE SITE. GREAAAAT JOB, INCREDIBLE. MAN I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THE STORIES LIKE THIS, FOR GOD'S SAKE!! CONGRATULATIONS! :DD

The pregnancy portion was wonderful, keep up the good work.

Could have made it little more pungent.

gr8 story, keep writing!

Hi Jim another great story, I don't know how you do it.

Happy xmas and new year.

George

In this era of quick sex, the buildup was great. Thanks for a good story, and keep writing!

I know it sounds really weird, but it is a very touching story, it is also tabooed with incest, but love conquers all. Keep up the good story line.

erotic, tender, and so very much as it should be. Congratulations on a great story..

Adrienne

Thank you for sharing your stories so willingly. I can't begin to explain how much I enjoy them. I find myself anxiously awaiting anything new, as I've read and re-read all that you've shared here. Please , keep writing.

While incest is abhorrent to most people, I found this story to be wonderfully sensuous and romantic. Three people in love finding that the only solution is incest. Who are we to condemn Chrissie, Patty and Bobby for the life style they have chosen? Another fine tale Scouries, keep them, and us, cumming!

Scouries,

and told in your usual fine style. Thank You. Ronnie W.

This story is incredibly erotic and very beautiful. Too bad that this wouldn't work in the real world.

Nookiehunter

I love this Story. (Kiss 4 Writer)

that storie was soo hot i loved it it was romantic and very erotic

Oh, my god You've done it again I don't think I'll ever find a writer I like better than you!!!!

So well written, I found myself there, It was romantic, erotic, and a good love story all in one. I hope you write more, mmm mmm good.

Love should be accepted for exactly what it is no matter what the situation. You did that with your story. Very well done!

Well written. I felt your passion and that of Mom and sister

if they are to be fun, erotic, and interesting needs to have all kinds of moments.

you could have as much sex scenes as you want --- in fact, some of the "authors" here write about nothing but sex and they are read by very few and commented by less --- but if you have no other moments, from the lighthearted to the somber/sober/serious as well as deep-felt sadness and sorrow and reflection,,,,, you don't have a story,,,,

one of the main objectives in fiction is to make fake things/stories real, or as real as possible.

you could have as much sex as you want, but it needs to be only a vehicle to carry the story through, not an end in itself:

because if that's the case, you have no story but PORN. there's nothing wrong with porn; it's just very boring if you see/read nothing but vaginas and penises and bodily fluids everywhere, from beginning to end,,,

Can't wait till the nwxt chapters come along

and although I would enjoy more of a seduction/erotic undressing/hotter description of the sex itself the story flows well. I wish there was more action and less conversation, but that is a small cavil for an overall excellent story. An easy "5".

I loved this story. Hope to read more like it from you.

That was a ver good story. Please continue the great work.

When I started reading it, the prose looked somewhat familiar. So I scrolled back up to see who the author was, and I knew I was in for a treat. I've been enjoying your stories for a long time now. You take the time to develop your characters and explore the camraderie and the romantic relationships between them. You describe the characters' physical appearances as the story progresses, often through dialog, which is better than the typical one paragraph "I'm a 38DD" style of description that a lot of writers tend to use. Although the situations are somewhat unrealistic, the somewhat realistic characters keep the stories grounded. The only negative thing that stood out to me was that the title could have been much better.

thanks for the time you send writing these outstanding stories.merry christmas and happy new year to you and your family.i know it takes time,but give us more stories quicker.your fan from north carolina.

I loved your story. I've been reading stories here for

years and yours is at the top of the list!!! I am going

to go read some of your other stories now. Very exciting!!

Thank you and keep writing!!!

A wonderful love story! Only thing missing is the girlfriends baby and maybe her mothers.

You have great characters. Even though this story is somewhat of a stretch, it makes the reader wish for that better world where all of these things are possible. There is no crime when there is no coersion and sometimes rules made for the right reasons impede true happiness.

Loved the story line, kind of wish it was me it happened to. The thought of haveing sex with mom and sis both is such a turn on.