All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

Thank-you Jim for this storey. It was a seductively sweet storey. The future of their children remains cloudy but you wrote about a close family unit that already had respect and trust in each other. For most couples that takes years of building if the relationship ever survives.

I enjoyed this story years ago when I read the first time and just found it agin

Maybe you will return and write more

Chapter 2- Bobby continued to fuck his sister Patty and impregnated her nine more times over the next twenty-seven years. Patty used her middle name as her last name, so she and Bobby could get married by an unsuspecting local justice of the peace the day after Patty graduated from the university. Bobby and Patty had five daughters and five sons. Bobby also continued to fuck his mother Chrissie and impregnated her five more times over the next twelve years. Chrissie gave birth to two more daughters and three sons.

I loved this story. Very erotic. Love these guilt free incest tales. 5⭐️

That was a very hot story! Definitely had me all wound up and kinda jealous!

Thank you for sharing !

Liked it. Could use more descriptive color. An anal session(s) would be a plus.

So far it’s been great as a calm family getting along.

244 Jake

The loss of virginity was so poorly described that I'm disappointed .... it's a shame, the rest was great .

One of the all time best

I like reading incest stories. I really don't like reading incest + polygamy. The story was way too long

Way too rushed.

More please! I feel odd reading incest porn but how u framed it and lil details made it believable and right

Ohhh fuck me I need to be fucked right now pleeease shove your hard cock in Mommy's tight pussy please baby please...I want your cum so far in me it stays dripping out for days...

Still one of my favorite reads, even after 5 times.

Ohhh.... It was so intense and hot. The beach kiss between mom son had me cum like crazy.

Beautifully written. Made me envious too.

fab i wished it was me the lucky devil

you sir , are a wordsmith ! [If there is such a word!] . Amazing !!

very sweet story...really enjoyed reading each line...congrats.

For some reason this was a truly captivating and beautiful thing to read

Kept me reading on and on - enjoyably.

Love the story 💯

Very good story.

Please continue

Seriously good.

Great story up until the end . It could of made a second chapter

Third read & still 🥵 hot!

Bill S.

Short and sweet. Yes, like others have said, it could have used more buildup as well as love and emotion to solidify the bonds. But overall it was a beautiful tale with a lovely ending. That little marriage ceremony they did was icing on the wonderful cake that this story is. So romantic and loving. I would love to see a story like this but instead of it being short, it would be heavily expanded with more details from the characters' lives, their dramas and so on.

written about 17 years back, and still making 5s !

A great story of real time incest. Love is the foundation of all sex- incest, or non-incest. Fucking own mother, aunt, sisters, daughters are a excellent exciting joy and very orgasmic.

Great story. love brother sister incest.

I loved this story, as it is a really well written incestuous tale of sex between a Mummy, her Daughter and her Son, and I hope that the Son gets round to fucking his Mummy's and his Sisters arses, real hard, real dry, real often and real soon too...

Such a lovely and very well written incestuous love story, but I hope that at some point he fucks his mummy and his sisters arses, real hard, real dry, real often and starts on them both, real soon...

so beautiful a great wonderful meaty story

the best dont stop

2nd time i've read this, loved it, I know it might sound crude to some, but wish there was at least one session of mom & daughter making love. 5 star.

oooh dear god what a story. the best i have ever read so beautiful when a mother and a sister both marry there brother unbeliveabley lovely

Liked it. Editing was great and storyline was steady. Agreed on the lack of foreplay. Give the sex some body.

There was no build up of the love making. Not enough foreplay not enough oral, it was more casual sex than lovemaking, a good storyline.

Would have held more if there was more build-up and foreplay for Patty’s first time. There was so much which could have happened then with both girls in build-up and orgasms. More anticipation, more arousal… just more.

I’m going to have to give you 5 stars on this one . The build-up was nicely paced and very sensual , finally culminating in an erotic frenzy . Very hot

GREAT STORY LOVEDIT

Lot of good things about this story but the sequencing really threw me off and it seemed to change speeds multiple times.

You are a great writer, very talented.

I've been on this site for a long time and trust me when I say that this will be another re-read because I like the romance of it; the build up and it wasn't a quickie. You gave it a good ending the only thing I wish that could have been corrected is telling us a little bit more about Patty's baby. Other than that this was definitely a well written story and I'll be re-reading it again.

The story left me gasping for breath

Bravo encode encore

It is a great story I am looking foreward to more stories byScouries

This was so hot and I couldn’t help but play with myself the whole read. I just wish there was more mom on daughter action and more masturbation

A well written family lust, incest story. I sort of was thinking mom was going to spank Patty for her lust over Bobby,

then Patty. would give mom a good bum/titty whipping for seducing Bobby, but who knows that can be introduced later. Or in the following chapters!

I want more !!

Meh

Definitely wish there was more to this story

I thought it was one of the best stories I've read in a long time and like everyone else i think a couple more chapters would be great but great story anyway

AWESOME loved it, and finally a story filled with love, not a Mother being shared with other men I get tired of those!!! And loved the ending but you should have followed until Patty had her child and Mommy and her had more children!!!!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

best j"ve read

I would like to have Another story written about these characters. This one of my top 5 favorite Literotica stories ever. Thank you

Fast paced. Fun. Sexy. 5/5* Fav

One of the best reads ever.

Very good. would have enjoyed a little bit more action. Especially with patty. But all in all, not bad

I loved this so much, please continue

Brill great story really enjoyed reading it can't wait for next one

Hot story!

Holy, SHIT. I have heard this story twice now and I’ve gotten just as hard on wet both times. I fucking love incest. It is my favorite category. And even more of a turn on when there’s pregnancy involved. This is so erotic and very well written I can feel my pussy getting wet. (only because my cat was laying on me and I didn’t wanna move her. What is the only reason my hand stayed off my pussy) keep writing God that was hot

Second time around & it’s still 5 stars.

Bill S.

Loved it Jim. I've been with women before and with Couples. I've even been with a few Older Mens and there sons when I Danced and did Bachelor parties or B'day parties. This was Hot. I love the whole Respect thing to. The Sex was described GOOD to. I got my panties off and was rubbing my own pussy when I was reading. I remember how a Older Man I called Daddy was Fucking me and He Always Came IN me. How I would FEEL SOooo GOOD when I feeled Him releasing IN me and SOooo DEEP. When Ever I FEELED a Man CUMMING IN me my Pussy would Orgasm on the end of them.

Totally loved this story!!

The idea of getting his mother pregnant is very exiting

Oh gross!!

I love your stories. Thank you for writing them.

Didn't waste my time I'm way to sick of these stories focusing on monster dicks as the focal point. When there is a small percentage that size and most women don't like them bigger than average because of pain. Write a realistic story to enjoy...

I loved every word well done. Merry Christmas and happy new year.

After all the son / moms ex I e read I thought I was tired of it but this was hot.

When his mom gave permission for him to fuck his sister I almost orgasmed.

And that’s saying something because neuropathy has robbed me of that.

Life’s a bitch & then you die.

Bill S.

OH, and by the way...it is now Christmas Season 2022, and I gift you with another glowing review...

Because I want you to know how much I appreciate your writing...and I added this to my favorites list!!

MADDOGINTEXAS

Okay...2nd or 3rd time reading this...and I love it more each time I do!!!!

It took some time...nice build-up, Patty giving up her virginity to her brother, Chrissie giving in to her love for her son...both having his babies (especially when Mom was the FIRST to be impregnated!!)

And the wedding, in the surf, all together...declaring their love before God...right or wrong, they love ea h other, made a family, moved on to somewhere they were know only as time went on...

Beautiful tale, appeals to my sense of romance, and the incestuous relationship!

FIVE**5**STARS...AGAIN!!!!!

5.0 = 💯% (💥💥💥💥💥), 👍👍!

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Loved the story line, kind of wish it was me it happened to. The thought of haveing sex with mom and sis both is such a turn on.

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what a story,great storyteller very enjoyable.

Exciting narrative, well executed. Liked the payoff especially. A touch too much build up for me but liked it when momentum finally was reached.

Muy buena historieta, muy bien hecha, ambientada y dialogada de forma muy romántica sin caer en lo vulgar, por mi parte tienes 10 de 10.

Just like so many of the others, more would be nice! Keep up the good work.

LeB

This was an exhilarating story for sure.. i really hope the story continues.

Technically you screwed up because with Precum you still could get pregnant so technically both the sister and there mother could have both became pregnant

drinking their mommy's milk - perfect!!

Thanks Jim this was a grate story plenty of terns keep them Cuming?,

Hot story with two submissives. Good character development. A couple of loose ends: where is and what happened to the father? How do they live financially?

5*

BJ

it would be nice to see the family incest to continue... Its nice to see father fucking daughter and granny fucking grandson... give us more to read in another chapter.

Great story, very well written gave me a ton for my own imagination/dreams loved my mother so much and never told her my own dreams ever, left home at 17 never went back just calls till I was in my thirties and a lot of military time, she passed when she was 92 in her sleep, my mom was 5'2" tall blonde hair blue eyes with 46DD that were to die for she cheated on my dad with a family friend he had a big one 8" so my dad was just 5.5" and she was curious so she found out and lost dad they were married 23 years when the devoice hit 8 moths later I was gone had birthday no. 18 in a foxhole they told me I was not supposed to be there at 17 LOL ya right, I never had another dream about my mom after that cheating to the other person is the bottom of life for the second person, I found out my wife did a few times after she passed, My Kids told me, I was married 40 years and now regret all but my 4 kids and I never look back at my wife with good thoughts, I have zero photos in my home and will never put some around just my kids, I am now 72 and will die very lonely even with my kids close to me the loneliness is almost unbelievable, some of the stories here make me smile and I enjoy them, others I stop when a cheat appears and it takes me a day to get out of my funk, your was well done and she did not have a husband during the story so thanks Jim it was good and I enjoyed it. Michael

Great story indeed Jim, good job! Though I must say admit, in jest, that conclusion was hilarious! His kids are also his siblings and nieces, Chrissie a mom and grandma courtesy of her 2nd baby and Patty is going an auntie to her mother’s child 🥴 thank God I’d already shot up otherwise I’d have laughed myself into a gummy. Thanks for the read, it was delightful!

Wow! Pussy everywhere.

Love it is a great story

Fucking mom and sister…heaven on earth.

good story but could have been represented in a much better way!!!

I now pronounce you man and sisterwife and motherwife.

Very exciting story. Of course this takes place in a universe where immediate family sexual relations don't cause the myriad of possible problems they do here in our universe. I was wondering if there might be a follow up story where his girlfriend and her mother might join his happy harem, just a thought. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

One of the best stories I've listened to. Great work.

so is his name Jimmy or Bobby?

As I lick the drops of precum from my swollen dick, I send my whole-hearted congratulations on a story (fantasy) well done.

Excellent read of incest between mom & sis, husband now to both if not indefinitely as the story should continue with such sensual sex.

Might be a fantasy of many whom had an opposite sex sibling to enjoy and want such activity. Mom is the cherry on dessert with loads of cream for both to enjoy

First reading was 4stars, but somehow during my 2d reading it became a r star story. Amazing.

My situation was exactly the same, but with a different dynamic. My older by 4-years sister was the boss in our house and I loved her unconditionally since like forever. She ran around the house yelling while naked since like forever too and she grew to be a major exhibitionist because of her home nonchalance nudity.

Mom was very reserved but also did her share of house nakedness. I grew used to it but was always in my boxer briefs and a t.

My divorced within-a-year-after-my-birth mom was a well-paid Atty who knew 4 languages working for an International legal group so was never home.

I showered every day with my older sister and had been sleeping with her since I was four. The circumstance that began my sis and I bedding together was since we live in South FL and during a hurricane that wasn't directly over us but made a terrible racket made my older sis take me from my bed into hers. We were naked under the covers and in an innocent embrace but she kept me talking to her about how we loved each other which greatly calmed me until the wind died down and we fell asleep exhausted.

We awoke the next morning still in our naked embrace and we slept together until the day she moved out in her mid-twenties. She was tall, blonde, flat-chested, (with great push-button nipples, though!), and was / still is model beautiful whereas my also very pretty brunette mom was shorter and curvier with much larger tits.

My sister was a slob though and lazy. I constantly forever was cleaning up after her yet never complained. I was and still am so in love with her. She would come home from her earlier jobs and start taking off her clothes and just dropping them on the floor and I immediately stopped helping mom with her research or whatever I was doing and follow sis picking up her clothes until I'd walk into our bedroom where she'd be standing naked and she would pivot and in all her glory say, "Don't just stand there, FUCK ME!" Whereupon I would calmly hamper her (and my own) clothes and then push her onto the bed where we would fuck and suck like rabid dogs for well over an hour.

Where was my mom? In the family room where she moved her desk and laptop so she could (at least) see us every night. We both just started kinda gravitating towards what mom was doing and we just started to help her with her work and we grew closer that way all of us hunched over papers in her research, my sister and I helping mom in the family room every night.

Mom knew the moment we started having penetrating sex..., because my sister told her exactly what she was teaching me! I learned why a little later why mom never stopped us from sexing each other. It was because mom and her brother, our Uncle, were still enjoying their incest from when they were young teens and I..., as it turns out, was my uncle's son!

I remember thinking that was cool and my sister telling mom, "Fucking great! That means I can have his kid! Seems to be a family tradition around here!" And they both burst out laughing!

My sister was my half-sister which meant when I impregnated her (I had just started producing sperm) there was little medical concern for our child. My mother being a half-sister to her older brother further obscured the genetics.

I remember my sister ran to mom naked with the news and they hugged and kissed and we made arrangements for the newborn. I don't know if I can say our ages here but let's just say I was a dad... before I was a teen!

A little more to the story. Here is an example of the power of my sister over both my mom and me.

One afternoon I had just finished detailing her hardtop convertible and was upstairs taking a shower. My sister burst into the shower naked with me and scrubbed me head to foot. She then dried me off and (not getting her hair wet) she then took me into bed, to fuck me as a reward for detailing her car.

For whatever reason, my mom came into the doorway with her usual just robe on and was watching us when my sister, noticing mom in the doorway, calmly climbed off of me and grabbed my mother pulling her to the bed COMMANDING her to disrobe and fuck me.

Now, we had talked about this scenario happening before and it was not the first time mom had watched us.

But right then my mother, being the compliant sub she is, took me into her mouth and satisfied I was lubed enough for her pussy sat on my fat cock, and fucked until she came 3x and I came in her pussy with her 3rd!

Now, remember, I always did what my sister told me to do (and less my mom) because my sister raised me, sis, constantly reminded both of us, TO BE HER WILLING SEX SLAVE!

Done. Something mom or I never protested.

If you should wonder we are together to this day raising our boy and a girl - she had with our uncle.

Yes. My mother and my sister are our sluts while we remain their sex slaves. It all depends on our roll of the dice for our very fun stay-at-home entertainment.

Absolutely mind blowing. To the best of my liking