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HuskyoneHuskyoneover 3 years ago

Great story with a happy ending.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago
I just

love, love, love a happy ending. It's like an erotic Hallmark movie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Two thumbs, and one cock up

One of the best stories I've read I. A long time. I loved every second of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Kept me coming back

One if the best stories of tabboo I've read. Each time it caused a strain in my jeans that only Patty or her mom could fix. Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

bigdaddyg123bigdaddyg123over 3 years ago

""Ohhh Mommy," I Groaned:" - Eighteen Year Old Brother/Son, Bobby Coursey and Nineteen Year Old Virgin Sister/Daughter, Patty Coursey and Thirty-six Year Old Mother, Christine (Chrissie) Coursey. It's been seven plus (7+) years since I first read this story and (six [6] years since I last read this story. The last time I read this story I referred to Bobby inadvertently as "Billy." The story reads better in every aspect--in my opinion--than each previous time. As of this reading there are eight hundred fifty-two (852 as of 0236 AM, November 21, 2020) ) comments, and I've just read most all of them! There was probably five (5) outright negative, a couple of them even nasty, comments of the current total. That's an awesome approval of ninety-nine point four percent (99.4 %) ratio!! Honestly, I can say that Jim 'scouries' is Da' Man!!! And I've enjoyed each and every one of his stories that I've the pleasure to read. I take this opportunity to offer him my deepest appreciation for his contributions to his reader's here on 'Literotica' and also 'storiesonline' and also to the beauty and difficulties of actual incest love, and lovers, his respect of his characters, and their romance exuded....and lastly to the greatest pleasure of we many incest lovers!!!.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
wow

i can imagine bobby's daughter fucking bobby , his mom and Patty and all other characters in story xd

f4nt4syp3nf4nt4syp3nover 3 years ago

This is one of my favorites. I keep coming back and re-reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
warm and loving

how sweet, good read for the warmth i felt in my nipples and tummy

good feelings you draw out

t/ y

J

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Almost a 5

Your story was Very well written with only a few grammatical errors. I would have given you a five but for one exception. When Bobby took Patty for the first time, there was NO foreplay in the story at all! No kissing, no oral, no build up. It was like here we are and in it goes - in one push none the less - in a supposed virgin. The remainder of the story was excellent for the most part, and I liked the ending.

newtype2525newtype2525over 3 years ago
a true love story!

Thank you for this gift!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Reminds me of my similar experience

Although mine isn't with my mother and sister. It is with my wife and her sister. The love actually grew over time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Sex, but lots of love!!

I enjoyed every bit of this story. I like the sudden everybody nude part and thought that sharing a joint between all of trhem was a nice touch. I deep down enjoyed the freedom and desire of the women to be impregnated. When i dated in my late teens and 20’s, I usually had a desire to seduce their mothers!! Oedipus complex? PROBABLY.Leaving my email address if you ever care to reply! bracedoc123@comcast.net

Shane279Shane279almost 4 years ago
Great

a little rushed could have added some more detail but overall great story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
complete enjoyment

the way you wrote this beautiful story is totally awesome -- you really made each character to become 'real' -- you took your time and made this a short novel -- brought me higher and higher as I read more -- no BS or exaggeration of your size or the woman's size also -- you gave us a well written love story that I would love to have been in myself -- please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
The front of the cabin faced the breaking waves of the ocean across a swath of white sand.

"Swath of white sand" to the Atlantic??

I better go check. Sounds like rising water levels have flooded out the building, or they are about to! Probably these folks knew about global warming before most of us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Sensual and tender

Sexy...satisfied my need for story with deep love. Thanks for the sweetness

rightbankrightbankabout 4 years ago
Living Happily Ever After

is special

thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Truly Awesome Story!

I love the way you built up the story and then brought it all together at the end. Please keep writing and submitting your wonderful stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Excellent job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very good story

Thanks for the good story

MidKnight1378MidKnight1378about 4 years ago
Very nice story...

I kept expecting Bobby to wake up at the end and realized he dreamt all of it. I like your ending better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Merry Xmas

It's been a long time since you wrote it and I see many people still like it. It's well written and but this is one of those that could have been a lot longer developing in a more believable way. Of course we all want our moms and sisters to fall in love with us and say yes right away, but at least in my case it took a long time...

cindyp1976cindyp1976over 4 years ago
love

loved this story

tiercenpttiercenptover 4 years ago
very good story

very nice "short" story. wasn't even a stroker story as for usual for the shorter ones.

you somehow managed to fit an "entire" story into three pages. as of right now finishing your story I don't have any feeling you missed something a potential storyline or forgotten mention (Cathy).

only thing what confused me was the change from Mom to Chrissie and to mom again. she said "you shouldn't call ur mom like that" (although not insistently enough) and he kept calling her chrissie shortly after without anything from her. and then little later mom again?

only thing I thought was kinda confusing.

nonetheless 5 Stars.

a rarity to have such a short story and yet so "fullfilling".

Great job

Gary4everGary4everover 4 years ago
Great story!

Really good story. I was stroking my cock by the 2nd page. hahaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I never called her mommy, it was always mom

I called out mom a lot as I was cumming deep in her pussy. My mom never called me son either, it was always by my name Greg. "Oh mom, I love fucking your pussy," I'd say. "Oh Greg, I love your cock, fuck me harder baby," my mom would respond.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
How often....

I've stumbled across your story three times now. It deserves a 5 star rating! Sorry, but I'm a little slow on the uptake. Truly a realistic story!

guiltypleasureloverguiltypleasureloveralmost 5 years ago
So great

I've read this story a couple times before. Great pacing, great imagery.

A sequel would be great

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 5 years ago
Excellent

What a wonderful story. Thank you so much for writing this and many of your others. Exactly the kind of story that ticks all my boxes. 5*

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 5 years ago
BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!!

More chapters neened, a lot more. well written very nice....... THANKS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Fuuuuck

Well written, Wow well done, Lots of light and shade, building......

TallManReinventedTallManReinventedalmost 5 years ago
One or two clichés but...

Still a fun read, despite one or two clichés and spelling mistakes. On the whole, nicely written, as others say here. Go for more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Still a good read

Still enjoyed reading this story now whn some time ago I came across yr story here...and comparable to others your story stands within the best three authors I came across here.

Immensely enjoyed the storyline....good flow.....sexually aroused....good ending.

Tq

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
ONE OF YOUR BEST, FOR SURE

Thanks for sharing your *fertile* imagination with us.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A Nice Story

Nicely done1

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

delicious

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So wet!

I honestly played while reading when Bobby fucked his mom. Came twice and still throbbed as I finished the story! It was a fantastic one! However I am surprised that Patty didn’t get pregnant first. Oh well, she did eventually I guess. Great job!

olblueyesolblueyesover 5 years ago

well written, well paced, loved it, one of the best romantic incest tales I've read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good pacing, content. Editing minus

Never neverland.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

great story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome

One of the most amazing stories I’ve ever seen. Someone should make a movie with the story. Thanks K17

Happyman47Happyman47over 5 years ago
Great story

You told this story so well I read it twice. I'm sure I'll read it again. I was so hot I wish I was as lucky as Patty and Christine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Loved it

I loved your story. It is all my fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Mom......

I also wanted to be fucked by my own mommy who is a gorgeous busty woman. I dreamt about her fucking me hard on top of me......this story just added fire to my imagination. Great!!! I wish I could be her son.......

OOAAOOAAover 5 years ago
FANTASTIC story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!

ksjediksjedialmost 6 years ago
Good story

Really enjoyef the story. Such loving characters so well written really enjoyed this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Oh Mommy

I loved that story. I hope you have some more like it.

scouriesscouriesalmost 6 years agoAuthor
40,000 VOTES!!! And counting...

This story was published on LITEROTICA in December of 2006 - almost 12 years ago. Since then, as one commenter recently pointed out, it has received over seven and a half million reads and has been favorited over 2800 times. And i’ve been delighted to read the over 800 comments that have been posted on it.

This week when I checked my authors page I noticed that the story had just received its FORTY THOUSANTH VOTE. And in doing so it had become only the second story in the long history of the site to reach this number. I want to take this opportunity to thank every reader who has taken the time to provide me feedback (whether by voting, favoriting either me or the story, or by voting). It’s greatly appreciated.

When I first submitted the story I never dreamed it would be this successful. These numbers are just more proof of the incredible power of the internet and the ability it gives any author to reach and entertain readers from one end of the earth to the other.

I read the story last night for the first time in many years. I enjoyed it - it made me smile! And while my stories are “fiction” they almost always include leading characters who are based on people i’ve encountered in one way or another in my past. And rereading my stories almost always evokes memories of these past encounters.

And when i’m reading these older stories I also can’t help but project my characters into the future. By the time i’d finished reading this one I knew exactly what had happened to mom, her daughter and her son over the last 12 years. Where they now lived, how many children they’ve had, etc., etc. I probably won’t write or publish the next chapters of their lives but it was delightful to revisit them again.

Thanks again everyone,

Jim a.k.a Scouries

Sapper257Sapper257almost 6 years ago
Memories

This reminded me of my sexual awakening when I was 15. I joined the Army as a Boy Soldier to learn an Apprenticeship. We had the same long holidays as schools and terms were the same Christmas, Easter and Summer.

Used to spend a lot of time at home with Mum and would often walk about in only my underpants. Dad once mentioned I should cover up in front of Mum and also said "sometimes neighbours popped in", not that I noticed.

Mum said when Dad was out of earshot "Don't worry about your Dad he's only jealous because you have a nicely developing body Brian" she chuckled "just be careful please".

"Okay Mum" and smiled "the Army is building us up with all the exercise and sport.

In the summer leave I was walking about in a swimming costume. Dad never said anything but commented once "Be careful old Mrs. Jones doesn't see you, she'll have a heart attack", he said jovially.

Mum joked "Not just old Mrs. Jones son, anybody younger as well who appreciates a young muscular body" Mum smiled, then without Dad hearing "some of my girlfriends could be interested".

Another day with Dad being at work and being in my underpants I said to Mum cheekily "Do you have that list of your girlfriends that might be interested in my body" with a smile.

Mum said "You have plenty of time for girlfriends when you have finished your apprenticeship Brian" then with a smirk on her face said "you're not interested in older woman are you with all the young girls around, are you?"

"Weeeeell Mum .........." I smiled "what is it they say 'don't knock it till you've tried it', some of your mates are okay".

"You're growing up Brian, no female will be safe around you" Mum said with a smile.

"You're not looking so bad yourself Mum, you scrub up well" I said grinning.

"Thank you kind sir, don't receive complements from your Dad any more" and Mum lifted her skirt up almost to her thigh and wiggled her bottom at me with a big smile on her face.

"Tart" I said jovially.

"I could be" Mum said grinning and flashing her eyelids, "if only I was 20 years younger".

Jokingly but with an element of truth I stuttered "Well you could undo a couple of buttons on your blouse".

Mum stood ridged looking at me, thought I was going to turn into a pillar of salt for what seamed like a lifetime but a few seconds and raised her hands to the top of her blouse. Still starring at me started undoing the top button, then the next till all were unbuttoned. Now I could see her pink bra, I had a stirring in my underpants. Mum pulled her blouse open and bent forward exposing a lot of her cleavage, saying "Happy, is that enough Brian".

"Mum you are beautiful" I whispered.

Mum started pulling her blouse together "Don't" I said followed by "please".

"I'm your Mum, you're My Son" Mum stammered "but looking at the twitching in your underpants Brian do I mean something else to you?"

"Yes" I stuttered "I love you".

"As a lover, Son or both?" with a pregnant pause "I've noticed you looking at my breasts and legs".

"Both Mum".

"I've also been naughty and aloud you to look up my dress when crossing my legs, you might have seen my knickers and worn low cut blouses and dresses so you could see my breasts. I know I shouldn't have encouraged you but it gave me a thrill like I've not had for a long time and enjoyed the banter".

I walked towards Mum and because her blouse was open put my arms around her waste and hugged her. I gave her a quick peck on the lips.

Mum said smiling "Is that the best you can do Son" putting her arms around pulled me to her saying "Oh" as she felt my stiffy pressing into her tummy then rubbed her tummy over my now very hard penis.

As we came together our lips kissed and like lovers. Mum opened her mouth so I did, "You're learning My Boy" she said.

With the kiss I moved my hands up Mum's back to her bra and fumbled trying to undo it.

"You need more practice Boy" laughing "squeeze the clip together and it should ping open, have another go while kissing me Brian".

We had another passionate kiss now with me poking my hard-on into Mum's tummy but still to no avail with the bra clip.

We broke or kiss and Mum said "Want me to do it Brian?"

"No" and squeezed Mum's breast over her bra for a short while. Put my hands back round Mum's waste then ran my hands over Mum's bottom and pulled her bottom on to my stiffy. Mum gave out a moaning sound from her throat, thought "I must be doing something right" I was pleased with myself.

Feeling more adventures started pulling Mum's skirt gradually up to her bottom while holding her cheeks onto my stiffy. When the skirt was over her bottom I felt her knickers and warm flesh.

Mum whispered "Result" and continued kissing. Pleased I'd achieved, found the top of her knickers and placed my right hand inside. Waiting for a while Mum broke the kiss and said "You wont receive a written invitation Brian" and carried on kissing.

I slapped Mum's cheek with my free hand that was received with an "ow" from Mum. Running my hand over Mum's hip and around to her tummy we parted to give me access to her lower regions. At the same time Mum took her arm from around me and placed her hand on my underpants and over my penis. I shuddered inched my hand into Mum's pubic area. Mum caressed my penis and said "If this is all text book stuff and Lads Mags you'll find what your searching for very damp through my pubic hair".

"Mum I'm almost cumming".

Mum removed her hand saying "Don't want you cumming too soon as I want some fun".

With that my fingers found Mum's virgina as she said very damp, Mum parted her legs to give me better access saying "Is that better Son" and groaned "Now raise the palm of your hand so your finger caresses my clitoris". Soon Mum murmured "Wonderful, just play with the nub until I climax, don't think it will be long". Mum buried her head in my shoulder "Keep going My Boy" and placed her hand back on my penis inside underpants caressing me.

"Mum I don't want to cum like this".

"Don't worry Brian" mumbling "I'm nearly climaxing then ill make you cum and you will quickly recover then we can continue in bed". With that Mum's legs buckled and climaxed onto my hand". Breathing heavily Mum said "That's been a long time since that happened" and kissed me hard while I removed my hand from her knickers. Mum's hand carried on caressing my stiffy saying "cum for me I want so much more from you my beautiful Brian" and within a very short while shot my load into Mum's hand and underpants. Mum kept the motion going until I was drained.

Mum cried with pleasure as I kept pumping my cum into her hand. "Thank you so much My Son, you've made me so happy", wiping the tear from her eye we kissed.

As our breathing subsided Mum said "Now lets go to bed for the main course. You will soon be hard again as you know and I remember then we can make love the rest of the day and fall asleep, what do you say Brian?"

"Sounds good to me, I'm twitching already Mum" I boasted followed by "what's for desert?"

"I'll think of a treat you will like, if you're not sound asleep and you still need tuition undoing my bra as my breasts need some attention" Mum said so joyfully.

"I'm sure you are a good teacher Mum" I replied giving her a kiss.

"I'll have to do some remembering and with the books under your bed we'll make it work. Brian my knickers are saturated and that's not happened for a long time, your pants are sodden with cum you naughty boy and I love it".

"I will carry you upstairs, throw you on your bed and remove your knickers to see your pussy ready for action Mum. While I'm practising undoing your bra to caress your breasts and suck your nipples I'd better be hard again, or you are sacked!"

"You could smack my bottom, gently Brian for being a naughty girl".

I chucked Mum on the bed and grabbed Mum's knickers on the bounce and slid them down her thighs viewing her virgina as they slid past her knees, calf's, ankles and feet to the floor. "Spread them Mum, I ordered".

"You are so domineering Son".

I removed my underpants my only remaining clothing by which time my penis was about 90 degrees.

Mum noticed and said "See, told you so big boy" as Mum opened her legs then teasingly with a smile on her face raised her knees giving me the full view of her hairy pussy and my penis was now nearly pointing to the ceiling.

"Happy my soldier man?" not replying as I was climbing on to the bed between Mum's legs she closed her legs and lowered her knees, saying "Bra training first Son" and span round on the bed removing her blouse.

I soon mastered the clip, the quick nipping of the 'hook and eye' together, releasing the elasticated bra strap and releasing Mum's breasts. I easily slipped her bra over her shoulders and down her arms to be discarded on to the floor near her saturated panties.

Mum took off her skirt and saw Mum in all her glory, naked as the day she was born. "Well, will I do Brian, I see your cock is almost vertical. Do you want to impale your cock inside your Mother and start a full relationship with me, I do so its a no brainer, the amount of pre-cum cumming from your purple head I want it inside me".

"I'm only here to serve, teach me please Mum, or would you rather I called you by your Christian name?"

"No Brian, that is for your father, not very often, you call me Mum or Mother I don't mind and call it out loud but not when Dad's around. We after all mother and son, which will never change" Mum stated, "One last thing", pointing to her pussy "I don't want this being called any nasty words you might hear in the Army. Your Dad said it once and lived to regret it. This, my hairy pussy you can have looking as you like, bushy, trimmed, a runway or bold. The choice is yours, you can shave it for me that turns me on and I then make love like a bitch on heat. We will work through all the different positions in time and last but not least you can't make me pregnant. When I'm disposed I will satisfy your needs one way or another. Soon ill be available 24/7 365 days a year so your leaves from the Army will be well taken care of. Now make love to me in the Missionary Position Brian, Son, Soldier".

That's how our sexual relationship started and we still have fun.

Enjoyed relating my memories.

REgards

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
LIKE IT VERY MUCH. I AM DEFINITELY NOT THE ONLY ONE: 7,638,087 VIEWS, 2,285 FAVORITES.

I will check your other stories when i get a chance.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
looks promising

how many did the mom and son have ( in babies ) and brother and sister have ( babies ) is what i'd liked to know , did innie ( any ) of them have twins , , or triplits I am kinda guessing mom did . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Awesome

I also did that with my sister and my mother...exept I didn't say, ohhh.......mommy, I said oh fuck. But my ister said oh......mommy when she licked her wet, warm, pussy. But at the same time, she was throbing my hard dick. But when I got back from tbe trip I broke up witb her. She was pretty pissed at me. And to this day, I don't regret anything, because now I have my toddler, Sophie. And I love her with all of my heart. ♡

jorgenhenryjorgenhenryabout 6 years ago
Mom and me

YesI did the same, it was so wonderful when my 16 year old cock entered my mother's lovely hole, her warm and greasy cunt. I also was moaning mommy oh mommy I love you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
R

Great! I am not a reader but I love the pace in which nothing was rushed.

Omart57Omart57over 6 years ago
Great

Loved it, a great story! I'm a sucker for a happy ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good.

Intro a bit long but an excellent story. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Smiles

I hope you still spread loving thoughts.

MaxDecattMaxDecattover 6 years ago
I liked it!

I liked it because it brought back memories. Not that I fucked my Mom, but me, then aged 14, and my brother, then aged 16, did fuck her sister (my Aunt) and my two sisters when we were on holiday together. A lot of what you describe is pretty much what happened, not at the seaside, our place was/is a lake and sail boats. My aunt was pregnant immediately after that...her husband thinks it is his but as she said he only fucked her once a month the odds are strong that our "new" cousin who is now 12 years old is definitely mine or my brothers. We used condoms with our 18 and 20 year old sisters but aunty was far too horny and fertile and only wanted us bareback. We seeded her together with double penetrations and one-on-ones many times that holiday. We still fuck our sisters who are now in their 30's and married with a kid each. Not ours as we only use condoms with the sisters. Feel free to use the info if you want incorporate into another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please give us another story .

But give it a more romantic title and make it seem real. The problem I have is that everyone always writes in how big the dick is. It's a romance not a porno...I want more elegant writing and I believe you could do that. Bobby was the best male lead for a story so wonderful...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
proof reading

Has is ever occurred to you to have someone read your work before submitting it. There are words missing in your text; there are spelling errors; there are grammatical errors of tense and verb form. All of these detract from an otherwise lovely little fantasy story. Keep writing, but as Hemingway said "the genius is in the editing".

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
so good

It's 2017 now and I don't know if you're still writing, but this was a fine story. Just the right pace in development, and the emotion was just perfect. The sister being older was the finishing touch. Just two things: Does every story have to include a huge cock? And why does the son have to be so old? I've heard boys all my life say they were turned on at extremely young ages by older women. Just my tastes, I guess. I hope you keep writing...or return to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great

, but he did

I loved it. I thought it had enough background because of what he had to go through into get the pussy. My brother and I fucked a few times, but his dick wasn't big enough for me. Its so sexy that the fucking was so good they committed to each other and mom wanted to have a baby. I came so damn good!!!

Sam382Sam382over 6 years ago
Stupendous

This was a stupendous story scouries. The ending felt rushed though. But this definitely needs a follow-up; what does Patty end up having: boy or girl? Do they ever return to their ocean side beach cottage? IF they do, do they eventually rebuild the original house so that they have more room for them and the children that they have together? Do Christine and Patty have more than one child with Bobby, and how many more?

RailroadTareRailroadTareover 6 years ago
Sets up an old song...if his grandma gets some, too

Many, many years ago when I was twenty-three

I was married to a widow who was pretty as can be.

Tom Arnold's "I'm my own grandpa"

Great story. Well written.....schwing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wth

I get mother and son sex but marrying them is just messed up the child's mom is also gonna be her grandma

ROCKY70ROCKY70almost 7 years ago
VERY GOOD STORY !!!!!!!!

Mother/son sex is always best, but add a siser I guess it's ok, But don't add any more.................. thanks for the read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great

Very good story BUT you could write a bit more stuff like a background about the family and other more detailed stuff. Story like that could easily be 9-10 pages!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Loving Family

What an awesome way to live. My wife and I speak about living our lives like this if we had our own family. We don't think there is anything wrong with being a very open and loving family. We also agree that what goes on behind our closed doors is up to our family. It turns us both on in a big way when we speak about this subject.

MajorRewriteMajorRewritealmost 7 years ago
5 stars

Fun, sexy, taboo, lighthearted, excellent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Genetics

Children born of incest often have birth defects and limited life spans. This is why family members are usually disinterested or repelled by the thought of sex. The violation of this normal taboo is what makes the story hot. Not at all realistic but a fantasy well-written.

Familyguy469Familyguy469almost 7 years ago
Good story

Hot and sexy, made me horny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Excellent build up of the characters and the story was very sexy.

What a vacation to hey had and all three enjoyed it so much. Thank

for a detailed of the sexual activities. I don't know if I could share with anyone

Sexual. I'm a little greedy and selfish.

billybudd42000billybudd42000about 7 years ago
Outstanding story line.

This was a classic builder of a story. Hugely erotic and wonderfully descriptive. Families should live this this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story and want more...

Great story. Wish i had the mindset and a deep thinker to even write a portion of what you did here. Great job on an exiting and sexy story. I got so lost in your story and plan to read more of your writings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Slower build-up

This was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. One thing I'd personally like to have seen would have been more build up throughout the story. Still gave you 5 stars though! Keep up the good work! :)

charliebillcharliebillabout 7 years ago
Great story, Sexy AND loving!!!

I really loved this story. I also would marry and fuck them pregnant over and over!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I started to write this and

Then I thought "why bother, it's all been said." Then thought AGAIN thinking "doesn't matter how often"

Heck I probably have left a comment before.

I see the scenes: innocent , lustfull people on a deserted island, marrying eah other naked. I detect strong strains of hippydom.

You manage to hit ideas ecplore them and keep it erotic and innocent.

I thank you.

(And a lot of others already have)

Stay with us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Gotta admit I'm jealous...

wish it could have been me in the middle of those two. Love how you keep it sexy and erotic without being nasty or violent or having to introduce the whole extended family and friends. This is the way erotic stories should be written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Love is everything

Loved your story. I dream about loving two women myself, not necessarily mom and sister, but at least sister being one of the two... always have wondered what it is like to be able to love and make love with two women??

I look forward to reading more of your stories... thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Keep it going

17 years old and love using my imagination more than the million of videos online

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
For My Daughter-in-Law

A big complement to 'Scouries' that so many woman enjoyed the storey and were turned on by it.

It never degraded females and very little bad language or derogatory terms.

Would liked to have known more about how his girlfriend's mother seduced him.

Love in a family is always strong so it's difficult to see how a sexual relationship kindles.

I never had a sister so can't say if I would have fancied her, but had fantasies about my mother as an adolescent. Mum became masturbatory image along with pictures in 'Lads Mag's' and I can't remember if girls or other mature females were in my fantasies.

It was when Mum had words with me about the 'birds and bee's', saying Dad couldn't, that she said now I was growing into a man I didn't need to hide my sexual awakening about using tissues or spending too much time in the toilet. We were both embarrassed but Mum broke the embarrassment by saying "We only have one toilet!!".

After that it became jovial between Mum and I if we were the only two about and I went to bed early or to my room to study, Mum would say "For one off the wrist" or "With your 5 fingered widow" or "Makes you go blind" or "Your girlfriends best friend" or "I'll change the sheets in the morning". All the old jokes we had heard a thousand times before.

This bought Mum and I closer together so I started doing the actions of masturbating. Mum laughed. Mum started doing the actions back and as we males know a female never get the actions right.

The banter built up something like this over a period of time.

To this I would say "You need more practice".

Mum picked up on this one time and said "If practice makes perfect I'll have to find a volunteer".

I told her jovially "Dad will show you".

Mum replied with "Hughhh, no thank you".

"Why can't you handle 8 inches", I said jokingly.

"I wish" Mum responded straight away.

"You'll have to pop in one morning with a cuppa when I'm randist", I said.

"Don't temp me Son, I'll do it just to embarrass you Big Boy", and wiggled her little finger with a grin.

This was all good fun between Mum and I.

The next Saturday after her comment Mum did come into my bedroom after knocking but waiting for an answer with two cuppa's. Putting them down Mum sat on the bed in her nightie and dressing gown.

I starred at her in surprise, Mum just lifted her eyebrows and said "Have I missed the 'big' event Brian.

"Ah, no" I mumbled.

Then in all seriousness said "Well get on with it", Dads at work. "Not shy are we. You've shown me all the actions".

My heart was racing "But Mum" I stuttered "It was a joke".

"Oh your willy is a joke is it" she laughed and embarrassed me, "Shame!!".

With that Mum said seriously "It's no joke to me. I want to see the 8 inches my future Daughter-in-Law has in store for her", she smirked.

With that my heart wasn't racing so much and I began getting a stiffy knowing Mum was serious. I had a large mouthful of tea and put the cup down. Put my hand under the duvet, took my penis in hand and began masturbating.

"Good boy" Mum said and looking me in the eye, as if wanting permission put her hand on the duvet.

Nodding to Mum, she pulled the cover off me, by then my stiffy was a full blown hard-on. Mum sucked on her breath and gasped. I continued masturbating and Mum just starred.

Mum took her eye off my erect penis and looking me in the eye saying "Can I please".

Nodding yes, Mum took me in hand and continued the movement for a minute.

Then Mum uttered the words "Tell me if I'm doing it wrong, I've not done this for a long time".

The pre-cum was coming over her hands, my purple head was exposed as my foreskin slopped over down. Mums forefinger and thumb was covered in my juice's.

Mum said "My".

I gowned.

Mum changed hands and licked the one she had been using saying "You taste good Son. You weren't kidding you can't be far off 8 inches".

Being more confident I said "Be alright for your Daughter-in-Law, Mum?".

"Be alright for anybody from 18 to 80", Mum changed hands and cleaning up her left hand with her tongue said "Brian you must have been in the front of the queue when these were issued out, you lucky boy".

"Mum, I'm not far off cumming".

"Don't let me stop you, such a shame to waste it" Mum said.

"With that I shot all over my chest and stomach, jerking my pelvis while I did. Mum carried on with her hand till I subsided.

"My, my Son such a lot of cum". Looking at me said "Hope the tea hasn't gone cold".

Looking at all the cum on me Mum shook her head saying "No wonder the sheets are so stiff. Is this the amount every time".

"Suppose so, well the first time" I said. Mum put her finger in it and lifted to her mouth leaning like a spiders silk web.

"What do you mean the first time", Mum asked questioningly.

"Well the second time its not so intense Mum". Mum bent her head and licked my cum off my chest and stomach.

"And when will that be Brian?".

"Well doing that has made me stir again", I said "drink your tea and he might be up again".

"What, no, can't happen. Your Dad can't", Mum said "has trouble once".

"That's the difference of 25 years Mum".

"You are right Son, he is standing up again for fine weather".

Mum started masturbating me again, "Can't believe it Brian and so hard again, so soon".

"It's all yours Mum".

"Brian, I know it's wrong but........... but......... would you mind if I........ sat on it please".

"Of course not Mum".

With that Mum got off the bed, raised her nightie and removed her knickers and put them on my chest. She straddled me on the bed, knees either side of my hips, placed her hand round my penis and lined it up with her virgina and lowered herself on to me. "Alright", she said.

I nodded not knowing what to expect.

Mum started to raise and lower her body on my penis. "Is this your first time Brian?".

"Yes Mum".

"Well lay back and enjoy it, I'm going to try to climax before you but if it doesn't happen don't worry". Mum carried on bobbing up and down rhythmically. Mum was moving around on me and said "I'm trying to best position myself so you stimulate my clitoris which you will have learned about in biology. Found it. Wont be long before I cum now, please don't cum yourself".

With that Mum shut up and her breathing became more erratic, her movements more forceful then. "Brian, Brian, so good, can't believe it Son", partially collapsing on my chest Mum kissed me, her heavy breathing subsided and sat up. "Now your turn, thank you for holding back. I'll carry on till you cum inside me, hope you enjoy as much as me".

Mum's rhythm continued while looking down on me.

"Mum, Mum, I........I......can't stop, sorry" and with that I climaxed inside her. "Oh Mum that was wonderful, thank you, I love you so much".

"So you should Son, I'm your mother". With that my erection subsided and Mum got off me and that was the first time I saw her virgina and all our cum dripping over me.

Sitting back on the bed Mum said "You are a Big Boy my stud. Did you enjoy that?".

With a big cheesy grin said "Helped to pass the time", followed by a gentle slap.

"Cheeky", now lets clean you up, Mum went down on me with her mouth to clean me up.

"Oh that's nice" I said.

"Another time if you keep 'stum', you've given me more pleasure than I've had in a long time. Now while I clean myself up and change, you have a doze and I'll come back and we can have a chat, deal?"

"Yes Mum".

Next thing I remember was Mum gently waking me with another cuppa saying "Wake up Brian". With a cuppa in my hand "Mum said "Dad will be home in an hour so I want you up, washed and dressed, okay?

"Up again, so soon" I said jovially, "should be able to manage it".

"No Brian Darling, the shower", Mum retorted. "Normally your Dad and I go down the Pub on a Saturday night so I thought I might feign a headache, he wont mind and we can continue your education What do you say?".

"Well if it's for the benefit of your future Daughter-in-Law, suppose I'd better say yes Mummy".

"Correct answer Son".

That's how my affair started with Mum and like an Ariston it went 'on and on and on'.

Sorry its a bit long winded but wanted to contribute.

Love your writing.

REgards

CharlyDCharlyDover 7 years ago
Almost

The story got a 90 year old hard, but not quite to the cum part.

Good story.... Almost had me joining the three.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Triple love

Beautiful story, unending love.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very absorbing story

Yes, it was a wonderfully absorbing story line and well-written and plotted. I read it through and got a roaring hardon. That's a compliment. Would love to read more stories from you.

Kookaburra8Kookaburra8over 7 years ago
What a beautifully written love / Incest story

You really outdid yourself with this one.. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Doesn't seem enough.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
envy

lucky guy. no mother in law, two wives, a happy life ahead for them all , I wish I was that darn lucky..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great!

What a great story!

I'm a writer myself. Come check me out if you want:

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Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Scouries, a must read!

As with all your stories just the best! Should you not now be writing film scripts? Read every one of your stories, in a bit of a withdrawal mode, please post more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
A really nice easy story

What a beautiful story of love to read as it all ever so slowly developed between each members of the family. I loved the way that they ever so slowly began to experience their sexual loves together. In the real world incest could present problems. but as a story it made sense. Let's have some more. Thank you for also stirring sexual feelings within me. That was also good.

Leo. at bondpleasure1@outlook.com - if you want to reply.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MC + HNY

A little late after the story can out. But a lot early for THIS merry Christmas and a Happy New Year for this author. HoHoHo.

thebug37thebug37over 7 years ago
Happy Holiday Story

Gee, holiday, summer of fun, lots of nice sex, a given virginity, one very lucky son and brother. Very satisfied mom and sibling. Terrific five stars story. None better.

Horny_CharleeHorny_Charleeover 7 years ago
nice one

I think what most stories miss is the part after first sex. this story brilliantly covered it. mentioning about the repeated endless fuck sessions and happy fucking forever after make it lustful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
the best ending I have ever read7238

Keep up the great work I have ever read. Look forward to more episods.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Best incest ever

You have an incredible talent. Love what you write and how you write ti. Please don't 7stop

mark73107mark73107over 7 years ago

Loved it, simply loved it. I think it was an excellent read.

Nothing but consensual honest love. My sister and I had

that once many years ago.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
You're decadent trash fam

Hahaha lol what the fuck is this, with all the marriage and shit. Like invest is hot and all but having fuckin deformed little babies is gross af

TSreaderTSreaderover 7 years ago
Yummy!

A very good story, thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
loved this story wow

this was a great story and I think that it would be a great thing to have a follow up on how the family is doing in here new town and how is there life doing know . this Is a good story and great story line to I would give this a score of 10 thanks for sharing your gift with all of us .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it again... :)

It's been so long since I read it last that I'd forgotten it mostly, so the enjoyment was fresh again! Really loved the story too! ...usually mom/son stories dont really do anything for me, but once in a while you find one just written so well you cant help but fall in love with it. :). Oh, I think calling her 'mommy' adds a fun, kinky twist of yumminess to it, hehehe!

Thanks for writing for us (or yourself!), as usual!

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