All Comments on '"Ohhh...Mommy," I Groaned'

great story but you guys should write more about African I live in Nigeria

This is an awesome story. Good sex, of course, but also full of love. Not completely based upon lust, though that is present also. It's good that he made a choice between the girlfriend and his sister and tried his girlfriend's mother before his own mother - and the other woman of course. Though he was only 18 or so, his mother did not figuratively 'rob the cradle' by accepting his love at such a young age. I've read this several times. This family is close and loving even before they became romantically and sexually involved. That is good. One's lover should also be one's best friend. After all, whether lover or best friend you share a whole lot. Why not both at the same time!

Loved the writing ... Loved the story ... I hope you write some more

just one little thing --- he never poped her chery ... but great story

I love it have read it a few times

Nothing about this story shows it to be worth less than the five stars I rated your romantic endeavors to pull this family even closer together.

Truly enjoyed this story, kept me excited all the way through. Makes me wish I had the same happen to me. I do like orgasms even thought provoked. Read your BIO and hope this finds you well and writing.

Wow...couldn't put it down. Great story...hot, constantly, with anticipation.

Great erotic writing from my viewpoint.

Second time reading the story, is just as great this time.

So well written , a true tail of forbidden love capped by the making of a new family

Finally a good story that I can relate to.In your story, son gets mom pregnant and she delivers a baby girl and son is in the process of getting his sister pregnant. This is almost exactly what happened in my case. I gor my mother pregnant two times before my sister realized what was going on between mom and me and wanted in on the action. We got together and sis got pregnant with the first of 4 children with me. Mother also had 4 children with me and we finally stopped cuz 11 children was becoming too many to handle. I have a brother too. Dad was never wise to the situation,

This is my absolute favorite kind of story. Thank you for writing this. 5/5

Enjoyable and well written, even with the known ending it was truly a terrific read.

Too good.....let society get back to hell.....or heaven.......very errotic and thought provoking

Wonderful story

Girls look sexy when they r nude. There4 girls should never wear dress a at any place like school, college, office home and that boy should be allowed to fuck girls as much he likes & enjoy their moms too .

i'd like to know their doing so far as one

I love this story! Makes me wish I had two women like that...

This was a nice fairy tale. It was erotic, but it was flawed. I can't help but notice the errors and non sequiturs:

University (university)

fist string of sticky cum (first)

mothers family (mother’s)

when he as fourteen (was)

giving the two women their privacy and he his freedom (him)

b-b-q-ed (bbqed)

he held his streaming hose over the toilet. Felt himself hardening (hardening while peeing HMMM???)

Half way (Halfway)

no ones even (one’s)

took the roach (ONE HIT, NO MATTER HOW BIG, DOES NOT MAKE A JOINT A ROACH)

a half inch long butt (THAT IS A ROACH!!!!)

he lifter her (lifted)

sisters tightening insides (sister’s)

He rode Patty hard this third time (WHEN WAS THE SECOND TIME????)

Then (he) could feel her

he promised his wife (WHEN DID THEY MARRY????)

(He) (-L)(l)oved it

orgasming her need of him (CLUMSILY EXPRESSED)

suns just coming up (sun’s)

As with most of the better authors on this site the writing is top-notch, but the mechanics make a otherwise excellent story seem like a first draft instead. The promise is there, in spades. The fulfillment is not. Get a competent editor and improve the already high quality of your work.

Awesome!

WHAT A GREAT STORY. IT GOT ME HARD SEVERAL TIMES JUST READING THIS GREAT STORY.

I fucked my gf at d same time, reading dis story.... U are a magnificient writer

iloved it please keep writing it brought a tear to my eye

I love the depth and character in your stories, but especially they make me hard as a rock! I always end up playing with myself by the last page. I hope that pleases you! Thank you so much!

I really liked this Story, is something wrong with me.

Your story was beautiful, I genuinely loved it.

Those kids are gonna be so confused about their lives and their gonna get picked on. Not to mention they're inbred. I mean if I'm gonna fuck my own cuzzo I wouldn't try to get preggers because most of u slutz sayin " I wish my hot brother would give me his cum for the baby'" can't even take care of yourselves.

genius,genius ,genius

good jacking off story

Yeah, family fucking is great. Moms should encourage their sons to breed them and it's just sad that there wasn't a husband/dad to fuck and breed Patty

I pushed my finger inside when I read it... oh my God I was horny a lot... I dont know about mom I definitely need u bro... plz cum inside me, I too want to miss my periods...

I read every word of it, normallY I miss some out

Exactly the type of story I love to read. Very well written.

Very good writing and very very hot, keep writing these hot stories.

Maybe I should mention that it's my cock that makes her vocal. Her moaning and groaning only increases my desire to fuck her even harder. It turns me on so much when she says my name, along with many other things, as she comes.

Very Well Written!!

This story is very great reading. I only wish I had pictures to go with at least part of it.

The fantasies in my mind and down to my crotch, with my cock jumping at some of the thoughts expressed and imagined were and are exhilirating. Come and visit me as often as you'ld like.

Congratulations,

Great story! A must read!

Great story, loved reading it. Made me super horny.

Made me cum it was so good!! You're great!! I'd love to talk with you about other story ideas.... And maybe if you are into it we could do some Internet writing rp? I dunno... You can reach me on Skype at zukonium. I look forward to talking to you... Code word is vampire.... I know weird... But it works... I'll read some of you're other stories and I didn't notice very many mistakes either.

What a truly lovely sexual story , I got so excited reading a story with no inhibitions , my cock was hard from beginning to end. Xxxxx

Five stars for this delightful story of lust, love, and beauty. Well done.

I've read this several times and never get tired of reading it. Were that it be true and that I could be the son/brother. <3

How I love mother and son and son and daughter incest love stories

Awsome story just wished it were me.

Loved it! Keep them cumming!

thankyou for this extremely erotic tale,

I HAVE JUST JERKED OFF AND IT WAS FANTASTIC FOR ME. I WOULD LOVE TOBE THE YOUNG SON AND BROTHER. I COULD FUCK FOR A LIFETIME.

I HAD A SISTER THAT WANTED ME BUT I WAS TOO FAR AWAY. I STILL THINK ABOUT IT. SHE USED TO SUCK MY DICK WHEN I WAS AYOUNGSTER AND SHE LOVED IT

One of the best. made me and my girlfriend cum numerous times

That was a very sexy tale and made me very hard

Will enjoy myself now. Thanks

Well done. A perfect example of how love true love knows no boundaries not even those of blood.

This is an incredible story of love

Love.

someone needs to explain such to some of my childhood neighbors. The children developed normally, graduated high school, attended higher education schools, had handsome male and female children of their own, grandchildren, the last I knew. not one was ever a problem medically or emotionally. This is more than one such family I've known during my lifetime and all are fine. Hell, how was it for the bible people to explain not only of Adam and Eve, but Lot and his daughters, Noah and his family, etc. Rulers and other royal familes of Egypt, Rome and other such countries seemed to produce without 15 toes or fingers on either place. Nice and rounded story and fun to read this five star pages.

The children are inbreed's....pele

This is the kind of story I search and search for. It has literally every key element I look for. I mean this as a compliment of the highest order...it reads like some of my story ideas. Please, write more stories like this one.

Thanks for the share. It was very well written and you did a good job of character development.

Great story, close to believable, Hope you write more

I loved it. The seduction was beautiful but I can't help feeling you became bored with or eager to end the story by the last page and rushed through the sex. Still an enjoyable read.

Dear Writer,

The name is Thorn Woods. I have to say this story was fúcking AMAZING. I find incest stories so interesting. I don’t know why but they seem just so hot and erotic and make my body feel all tingly, lmao. I don’t know if you have ever heard the website/app called Wattpad. That’s where I write my stories and erotic one shots. I have no idea if you’re going to read this let alone see it but you should totally check out the site. I think you’ll love it as much as I do. If you’d ever like to contact me my email is GoddessOfMaddness@gmail.com.

I loved it and I never even though about doin incest until last week then I had f***** my cousin and man was it good just reading this story takes me off in to a deep high like nothing else could . In a one word description WOW.

Lots of foreplay leading up to the event then it was slam-bam, sis & mom, and both becoming his wife and pregnant with no prelude into this mindset progression. From virgin to wife in near lightening speed, unreal, missing much.

And all these incest family pregnancies stories never address how the new baby birth certificate (listing father) is handled. Unreal.

wish I had family could get this close would love to unite together never desire my mom but have a sister have always wanted to be with just like this

would really like an non erotic story were they tell their children whne they are of age about their relationship.

All it needs is something with Steph

Could you maybe do something in the future about the baby Steph growing up in that environment and also maybe have it so that Bobby has sex with her.

At least the third or fourth time, I've read it! It gets hotter every time, so I go back to your story list and enjoy even more of your tales!

More please

This is a wonderful story. A little quick on the draw, but they all evidently knew what they wanted. You know, contrary to what a previous commentor said, the children of incest today have little chance of disability. Many years ago, when the world was 'smaller', People in a given geographical area were often more closely related than today. In today's world, bloodlines are not so linear. Remember our ancestors who landed on Ellis Island came from literally all over the world and many before that who landed in various places on the east coast from wherever. It also takes more than one instance of incest to begin producing troubles in the gene pool. I really want to squash the idea that love between family members immediately produces deformity. Its just not so. Chrissy and Patty are obviously very much in love with Bobby and he them. Though it probably isn't, I'd like to hope that this is at least based on a true to life family.

Great fantasy. Good build up, not repetitious, intelligently written, and hot in the right places.

I got a little jealous when he wanted to pick the mother over patty!

Yummy! It was delicious!

Maybe this story doesn't really apply to the real world, but, if that ever happened, both of the children would be mentally and/or physically disabled.. Besides that, it was a good story. i guess it's a good thing that you didn't decide to make your characters have retard babies, it's good to stick to the fairy-tale side of things sometimes.

Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD

Lol Then Fuck Me 13 Inches XD

This was pretty decent. The sex scene wasn't that hot...but sex is hard to write,but I liked the teasing the easy feeling,the conversation... You portrayed emotion and character well. Got me stiff.

ooh my gosh, feel lyk i wanna fuck some1

one of the best i have ever read i hope you add more to the story later it was full of love passion and feelings over all a great story

A*

A+

i think this story is my favorite. i've read it at least a hundred times. i hope u post more stories. i read your stories always.your my favorite author

a lot of true love involved in it.

do you have a follow up story on the three and there children

Ron Texas cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

I was rock hard reading it and shot a huge load of cum as my thoughts drifted.

Incest can be the greatest love between the sexes. This story is a classic

I thought the story was very erotic and loving...

JIMMY!

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that baby shit was to much .....crazy . and your my wife now...lol 2 stars

I remember my Dreams

At this point I dont care if the story has any truth to it .I just liked how it kept me hard as a rock keep it up as I am .....great writing

Jack

Whoa, what a dream!

Your doing a gray job keeping us wanting more keep it up

Perfect for me.

wow...very romantic and hot at the same time.

i also have read this one on another site...xhamster...

I've read this story a couple of years ago but by someone else

(S)couries has, as is usual, outdone himself once again. The Coursey family is united in love, committment, oaths, spirit and souls! The matriarch of the family is Christine, the core of their love, the center of their universe; she greases the three-spoke wheel of their mutual beings. This story is not about lust, wantonness, sluttiness nor lewd pornography! It is about romance and a family "wedded" for life and dedicated to their unity, family and each other!

Mother Christine and her son Bobby are new parents, mother and father, of Stephanie, the third child of mother Chrissie and second sibling of Bobby and Patty, the daughter of Bobby and (and also his mother) Chrissie, sister of Bobby and Patty, granddaughter of Chrissie and niece of Patty (whow)! Expectedly, Chrissie's daughter and Bobby's sister Patty is now pregnant by her brother Bobby as the father; maybe she'll have twins in about seven or so months!!

The writer has written a very good saga of this illuminating family. the character's are cast in pleasurable roles and play their parts exceptionally. The dialogue is also very well written; the context and theme of the story is somewhat unusual allowing some believeability and reality of the story. Another gigantic hit by 'scouries', for myself and nearly seven hundred other commenting Literotica mother/son, brother/sister procreation, incest-loving readers!!!

I loved your story but you could have taken more time to develop your characters. Some of the early part of it seemed contrived and almost coincidental to your story line. There was so much more you could have done with it to make it an even better read.

Good luck with your future writing endeavors

damon

I bet that most males have lusted after their mothers and/or sisters. Not everyone is fortunate to find their soul mates in them. Nice story. Pleasant people and it seems this family will work out ok. It's not a foregone conclusion that mom will die first. With car wrecks and stuff, anyone can go first. In this family, the children still have two adults left.

While a bit far fetched, it's not out of the realm of possibility. People are just crazy enough to get together like this and crazy enough to make it work. Good job.

Although, I knew a kid in high school who was supposedly fucking his sister and his mother. I also knew, maybe 10 other or so people throughout my life who were involved in incest.

A lot of unusual things happen in the world of incest. I just would never would count out any variation in that world.

though none of us would want that to happen in our life. still you made me the male character and made me fall in love with sister with my mother's permission. lol.

great piece of art. heart touching really

I too wish there were a scale of 10. But, I'll just say its one I've really enjoyed. You've written some about rape, which caused me to be very disappointed in you. But this is well done. Their characters seem to get along very well, even though their sexual desires are the ones primarily explored here. I can see a mother and daughter shareing a man. Mommy can love him deeply and fearlessly knowing that her daughter will have a good father and that when she's gone, (as she must know she will die first) her love will not be left alone. Obviously, they are sexually very compatible and are very open minded to any topic. The daughter, Patty, (surprisingly) seems to be the most conservative of the group instead of the Mommy- or Chrissie. Patty will probably be the stabilizing force that will hold this unusual family together. This is a wonderful story. Thank You.

10/10 - IGN