by scouries
That was one hell of a story. I really enjoyed it, I started to jack off halfways thur the story when his sister grab his dick, DAMN, that was a good story, GREAT JOB WRITER
WOW WHAT A BEAUTIFULL /SEXY STORY, YES IT COULD POSSIABLEY HAPPEN, TO BE REALLY IN LOVE AND HAVE SUCH GOOD POWERFULL SEX IS A ABSERLUTE BLESSING , AND THE NAUGHTY INCEST PART OFF IT WILL ALWAYS KEEP IT HOT; REGARDS PETER
We loved the HOT story... Please keep writing 'em. I married my niece, her daughter & my sister & my niece is having twins in 9 weeks. And her daughter is late too. Yea!
The only thing is that i got a little too romantic and not enough actual sex. Mind you, I'm not saying i dislike the romance.
I liked this a lot. The mother/son bit isn't really my thing, but I LOVED the brother/sister stuff. Lucky Patty. I want a brother like that - one who'll fuck the life out of me
Good moments but so far from possible - come on- who would want a baby in this deal? Just TOO Ridiculous
Good story,first of it's type I read. Imagine not only loving your mother and sis but "marrying" them too.
One of the best stories i've read since i've been on this site. Keep up the good work pal!
Yes I had about the same experiance and My mom had my baby, now I am screing my dau and she wants a baby too
that was so spectacular! i loved it so much, i couldnt stop touching myself and moaning. i wish my older sister was around; i dont think she would mind doing this with her baby sister
absolutely loved it..... my tits have been hanging out of my shirt... wish bobby was here......
What a magnificent story. Well written - arousing and just plain HOT !! I hope you'll write another chapter, about the playful sex and different things they try. Thank you.
Super premise and unfolding of plot...Too much dialog.
Would be hotter at the end to have his girlfriend and her mom join the harem, engaging in 4-way hot lesbian loving with his mom and sister. the 2 mothers could have a daughter swap, swinging with each other's girl...the guy gets to fuck any or all of them each night, has babies by all of them, all daughters whom grow up lesbian....Excuse me, I've got to go wake up my mom and see if she'd like to have a little girl....!
I think that this story is quite good. I very much enjoyed this entire story. I wish there was a little more of a description of how the characters looked in the beginning of the story though. I also found some of the conversations confusing in the way that they were written. But, all else aside, an excellent story.
Mmm, I swear, I came almost every time one of them did! Though, still don't know why she screamed Jimmy. But I was focused on other things, at the moment.
Really good. ;)
Hope to read more!
It was just very cool. I loved the way Bobby teased Patty, and you could sense that his feelings for his mother and sister were much deeper than lust. VERY descriptive by the way :)
I simply enjoyed this story. Nicely written and well put together, very erotic without being vulgar.
The story is awesome through out but it's the part he makes his mom and sis pregnant is the most enjoyable...
this is perfect. i don't know what to say other that perfect i read it and i will keep it in my favorites and will read it again!!! thank you hope there is more to this amazing family!!!
Well-developed, with a great ending. I like brother-sister, but the loving mother made it more special. I also especially like it when there is true love involved. Looking forward to more.
I absolutely love brother sister love, and if the mother is included, hey...
I consider it a tragedy that I grew u with 4 brothers but perhaps this explains why I love all women.
My favorite type of incest story is mother/son followed by brother sister. Both missions accomplished.
i really liked it but i dont think the mother should of had the baby or been married to her son other then that i really liked it
Wow! your story is great! I've only started to read on this site and this story is one of my faves!
Keep up the good work! Write more! Mabye continue the story...? Cause it's my guilty pleasure!!!
One of the best stories ever. I would love to have a continuation. . . EndLess Possibilities!!! Keep up the fine writing!!!!!!!!
I have a confession, my older sister and I pretend have sex (ie dry humping or playing with each other) but never would we think of doing it for real.
Great story, exept for the part about mum was ... well yeah so 10/10 nice work.
i have enjoyed this HEAVEN MORE THAN 100 TIMES
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It Was Wonderful But I Didn't. Except Them To Get Married And Have Kids Like That. That Really Really Surprised Me.
Erotic tale, enjnoyable, would have been able to read the remaiknikng "parts" ; would enjoy reading the author's ...forever after.
I believe this story was one of the most unrealistic. If the girl was a virgin, wouldnt she feel some pain instead of pure pleasure? And why would the mother accept it so easily?
Wow, this story had it all to me. Man, I felt like I was living the story while reading it.
I really like the Incest stories, the "mother/son" ones best and then the "brother/sister" ones next. So this story pushed all my buttons. Well done, scouries, very well done!
it was good but the end was stupid. since they all have the same last name they can not live as " a husband his wife and HER mother" as you wrote. the only way it would work is if it was " a husband his wife and HIS mother" over all it was good but watch the STUPID ERRORS they ruin the stories.
toooooooooo freakinnnnnnnnnngggg gooooooooooddddddddd..............
i loved this story it made me so horny and boy did me and my wife enjoy it thank you for the great work
I'm so glad that I was able to find this story again. I had been looking for it for months since it was my favorite. I finaly give up on finding it today and BAM there it is. I have to admit that this story was 10x better the 2nd time around.
I'm so happy that I found it.
Also the point of the story is not the children that he has with his mother, because going by bthe logic that some genes will not show because they are the same then the children he has with his sister would also be deformed.
The point of the story was that he loves his mother AND his sister.
I've read it twice and enjoyed it as much the second time, I may even go for thirds
My sister shared her tits with me when they were first nothing but little nubs. Every day after school we would go to my bedroom and I'd strip her naked and we'd enjoy one another's body. Eventually we fucked. She was 14 and I was 17 and could never get enough of one another. We even managed to get 2 weeks together when the rest of the family went on vacation! I think we fucked in every room of that house and rarely put any clothes on! Our relationship continued for many years and at one point she even wanted my baby! She had two of them and both are very normal! After each of the babies was born the sex got incredibly even hotter as I would enjoy her milk whenever we had sex! When she would orgasm her tits would squirt warm sweet milk into my mouth! For those of you who haven't tried it the taboo part of this kind of relationship takes the sex to a whole other level! Nothing better!
I liked the fact that they both took turns and knew when the other was doing it.
get past the incestual weirdness...i loved it. i enjoyed the personalities, fun and interesting which really made the plot. i found myself eagerly waiting to see what was gonna happen, and not even the sexual aspect of it. great writing.
technicly if a mother and son or brother and sister had a baby the baby would be deformed
reason: when a woman gives birth she passes on all the genes of the father and mother but some genes dont show becuz they are not dominant but when 2 siblins have a kid they both pass on the same genes twice making all genes dominant so if the people have a bad gene say a cleft lip gene the baby will have a cleft lip they will get all the bad parts of both people
i like some of the other reply's are not into incest but i do enjoy reading about it and a lot of other topics and i have to say i really enjoyed your story it was one of the best i have ever read in this category or any other for that matter. i hope you keep writing to be honest your story was so good i think i will try my luck at writing some myself starting with a nice incest story or a slow paced romance no telling well again great story please keep writing. and for the record even though this story was fictional i have meet some real life versions of incest growing up years ago but they never seemed this interesting of course i was still a child back then lol. i am sure there are a lot of them around that we as normal people just do not know about but i be leave that is a choice for two or more i guess consenting adults. me personally i hope to one day find a good woman to settle down with who shares my love of good stories real ones and fictional ones. i am going off to collage soon for some more courses in computer programming but in my free time i think i will try my hand at some writing wish me well bye
I truly got lost in this story.The way it was written is amazing, the descriptions and the whole story made me want to be bobby. Altho im not into incest myself, it is one of the best, detailed stories I've read making my ooze pre cum from my penis.
I say that this is one of the best stories i have evwr read. I wouldnt do incest myself, but i think this story desrves more then a five. Keep writing like this and u will go big my friend. It had good romantic scenes, loving moments and conflict, i hope to read more from this author.
It was...interesting. Kinda messed up and reminded me of the backwoods a bit, the incest isn't as exciting when it's not taboo sneaky--and this story was completely the opposite of those two words.
Excellent story, but I'd like a sequel (or two). I like that it's not just about fucking but about love and commitment.
you should makena sequel to this story! it was very entertaining
I've just started writing, but have never read anyone else's work before.
You've ruined me. No one else will compare to this hot story Sweetheart!
Warm Regards and Happy Holidays!
Taylor (1MS)
i really enjoyed your story it was one of the best i had ever read please continue to write more
I think he should pound his baby maker into mom's crap box and fill her with his jizz :-)
It was very good and I plan on keeping this bookmarked/favorited on my browsers. I did notice one largely noticable error Bobby's name changed to Jimmy for a line lol, I understand if you wanted to add your name into it. Keep up the good work, I'll be reading more of your stories shortly.
Very well written and enjoyable to read. I must say the notion of adult incest is an intriguing one, especdially where there is genuine love with it. Keep up the good work.
I read this story earlier and just had to read it again.It was cool at the end as u talked about how they lived after they married.Make another one.I will remember this story forever.
This story is a great read... It kept me interested all the way through... I love the way the relationships developed... Would love to read a follow up story... Maybe Bobby could have Stephanie...??? Or Stephanie could have Aunt Patty... Or maybe even an orgy lol
I have read this story before and it remains on of the best. Thank you for a good read.
This is a hugely erotic story. Superbly well written and a great "builder" to the sensual ending.
im an older man a grandad actually my daughter is 31 and granddaughter is 12 i have fucked my daughter since she was 14 and anm now thinking of fucking my granddaughter.have seen her naked and get very hard . love her sweet bum cheeks and hope to soon spread the and penetrate her asshole.
As a registered nurse for over 40 years let me clear up this genetic thing: It is only in the third or fourth generation of incest that the deformities, brain degeneration, extra or missing fingers or toes etc. begin to appear and not always then. If there is something minutely wrong in their gene system it usually shows up in the third or fourth generation. IMHO.
I liked your story. The only problem I have is that there may be a problem with the children you produce with your mother and sister. It's a gentic thing.
This was a very good story. It was well written and kept the readers interest no matter what happened!
One thing people seem to forget is men and women are attracted to each other sexually no matter if you find the other person physically attracted (whether you are related to them or not). Most will not do anything about those feelings in they person is living under the same roof but you cannot deny the attraction...
Awesome read...
Well written, enjoyed the story very much thankyou. Could of done without the whole marriage thing, I didn't really like that bit but that's just my personal opinion! 5/5
Very nicely done. I could have done without the part where they all share a blunt (smoking is my biggest turn off), but everything else was a pleasant read. :)
With such a controversial subject, it's difficult to produce something that sounds almost normal. You shouldd consider becoming an author of erotic novels. They would fly off the shelves!
Yes you certainly made it seem real to me Keep writing it's worth the read and pleasure it gives.
Great story,great characters,really interesting style of writing,and very enriching.Thank you,and you should absolutely write a second part
I like your writing style. Flowing, sensitive. You took content that could be considered wrong, and made it loving, not 'gross.' ;)
this is one of the best i have read in a long time
thank you and keep up the grreat work
Although seemingly finalized, it is not and you have such great characters and relationships here, we need more from you........
this was a great story. there should definitely be a second chapter to this. make the story move along.
The bakground you give in your story really helps to get the reader engrossed in the story. Its something most writers fail to realize. I appreciate your stories they're very good.
As always a great story, I haven't found one of your stories that's not interesting and pulls me in. Thank You for your time and effort.
U should let bobby fuck his daughter and let patty give birth to a son who later fucks his mom n grandmom. That wud b lovely;)
thanks for the fantasy orgasm ... was sooo hot! I made quite a big mess.
i only like the brother and sister connection, how could he leave patty in the bed for his mother?! i only wanted them 2 to be together. Other than that, i loved!