by Fillmore
However, it is not only concluded but even continued in a sequel at:
http://storiesonline.net/a/Fillmore
You're welcome :)
This story is so well written and so endearing, I can't understand anyone ever giving it anything less than a 5.
well written but a little too unrealistic eg how quickly Harry becomes a consumate Master from presumably no previous experience
I wasn't really expecting that kind of story since all the other chapters are listed as EC nevertheless i enjoyed it just the same. Here's to you.
I wasnt really expecting that kind of story since all the other chapters are listed as romance nevertheless i enjoyed it just the same. Here's to you.
Um.. that was really weird. Well done on originality though. Just not my kind of story. I probably shouldn't have commented.. lol.
Wow. I girl that I'm looking to begin a relationship with asked me to read this. I never knew what this world was like, but I am starting to understand it. Keep them coming. Great story.
well written and just the right amount of everything...im so excited to have found this story, i hate to break away from it to go to work dang it but...off i shall go*sigh*...please keep up the excellent work while i catch up with this so far wonderful and erotic and so well written no bullshit story...just what seems to be a wonderful love story between Master and slave. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay
That was perfect. Emotionally, psychologically, physically, perfect.
Thank you.
I think that was the most ideal erotic short story I have ever read. Perfect. Thank you.
I have read this story for the third time up to chapter 18 and it will twice for chapter 19 when I get there.
Keep up the good work!!
wonderful story I really liked it a lot, althought I doubt most doms would learn how to Dom that quick but some do learn faster than others. A great story.