All Comments on 'Old & Divorced'

by Jaywesal

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good story, but...

Continuity check. You called Jim Sam at one point. Betty has bright blue eyes at the top of the page, and brown eyes at the bottom. Little things like that make the difference between a good story and a great one.

Bil PotterBil Potterabout 20 years ago
I don't care

I don't care about the color of her eyes or someones name - it is a great story and I hope you continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
HOT

talk about aroused cock after reading this whew

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hard

wow. this story had me throbbing and cumming lots. one of my greatest fantasies.

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