by jennatickler
You achieved a good mix of humor and sex in this story. I hope that in future chapters (and stories) you can maintain that. A good story, a good read.
The humorous touches were marvelous and made both characters very believable.
This was a fantastic story, jennatickler, i can hardly wait to read more stories. An outstanding blend of sexual tension, hot sex, and real life. Wonderful!
Very well-written, totally believable, and intensely sexy. Thank you
Interesting characters, good plot, hot sex! Nice job.
not even an erotic coupling story really...