by thornapple
We all have met an "Eli" at some time in our life. Maybe we didn't recognize it, or maybe Eli didn't play a role as prominent for us, but we have.
Great story. Really liked it.
Gripping. Unusual. So much more depth to the story and quality that I fondly found myself reading this again, and enjoying it as much as the first time.
Thank you for taking me with you on this journey (again), and look forward to meeting again.
There are some gems to be found here.
Why didn't anyone make a phone call to ask about the empty, dusty, house to locate and learn about Eli?
Sad to say it lost me in the beginning. Too much conversation without narrative giving life to the people that were speaking. Sorry.
Certainly unusual but rntertaining and generally well thought out. The beginning was confusing and the ending unexpected. Overall, a great story.