Old World Magic Ch. 10

PUBLIC BETA

Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.

You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.

Click here

"Hard daddy," she said as she bit her lip, "Give it to me as hard as you can, make your little girl feel it." She moaned with her eyes closed and her hands clawing at my body. I found the 'daddy' comment a little off-putting but this was no time to quibble. I began fucking Erin as fast and hard as I could and it was only a few strokes in when her fingernails sank into my shoulders and she cried out, her already tight pussy clenching painfully around my dick as she came.

I kept fucking her and it seemed as if she came again and again, each deep thrust bringing her to a new height in this particular orgasm. Her scream was wordless and unending and this time I knew there was no pain associated with it. Finally through my deep thrusts she managed to hit the highest peak and her scream became silent. Her mouth frozen open and her eyes rolled back in their sockets, she thrashed and clenched at my shoulders.

Finally her head relaxed and she looked at me, "Holy fuck." she murmured. Then pressing her body upwards she kissed me as I continued to fuck her, though my pace had slowed a bit. She whispered up to me again, "Please cum inside of me?"

I nodded and resumed fucking at my own pace. I'd been holding back for a while now, the half hour of foreplay had been intense and it was with great joy that I focused on bringing about my own pleasure. I slammed my cock into her hard and fast, eager to bring about my own peak. But she must have been close again because just before I felt my own bliss arrive, she cried out again and her pussy clenched down tightly on my shaft. It was too much for me and I spilled inside of her. With one last thrust I buried myself fully into her pussy and flooded her channel with my hot spunk.

I lay atop her for a long time, holding myself up on my arms, but with our bodies connected at the hips. Then finally I felt myself growing soft and I turned and rolled off her sweaty body. She immediately rolled over and took my softening cock in her hands. She began licking it and kissing it and murmuring words that I couldn't quite hear. "Did you say something?" I asked.

She looked up at me and said, "No daddy, just thanking this beautiful cock." She licked it a few more times and then crawled up to lay next to me and asked, "I don't think I can walk, would it be ok for me to spend the night?"

I smiled and pulled her body into mine and wrapped an arm around her, "Well, since you asked nicely I suppose..."

To be continued....

Please rate this story
The author would appreciate your feedback.
  • COMMENTS
Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
13 Comments
ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

I fund all the prostitution off-putting. I know, he lives in a whorehouse, all the girls are whores. Would rather see him with someone else.

WlljamWlljamabout 11 years ago

Love the content of the story so far! Unfortunately your understanding of the English language spoils it. eg Depending upon your accent; the words than and then sound very similar when spoken but have totally different meanings. Cheers

rhevrhevabout 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for the advice and support everyone. I've tried everything I can think of but the data is gone / corrupted. I've started re-writing everything and Chapter 11 of old world magic should be posed soon, so stay tuned. After that I'm going to get a chapter up for 90% true, and then keep flip flopping back and forth to both. Like I said, the crash wasn't the end of things for me... just a speed bump.

Thank you for the kind comments and the lovely feedback I've gotten to my email.

joshmosejoshmoseabout 11 years ago
fixing old files ?!?

rhev,

If you still have the old corrupted files, you might try opening them in say notepad, wordpad, and just a plain old text editor to see if some of the text might be recoverable. There will likely be some control chars, but you might still be able to salvage the main text.

Great series also, so please keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Software

@rhev:

Not believing in Software Piracy is great and a sentiment I share, but watching people throw their money at software for which great FOSS alternatives exist does sometimes hurt a bit..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Can't Waite (:

Good story can't Waite for the next chapters (:

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
keep writing man

your stories on old world magic have been great! stick with fantasy man this where you shine!!!

rhevrhevabout 11 years agoAuthor
sigh....

Just wanted to let everyone know I PURCHASED (I don't believe in software piracy) hard drive recovery program and was able to recover all three files, but they had been irreversibly corrupted. So... cest la vie. I'll just have to re-write I suppose. The thing that really bothers me is all the 'notes' I had on the old world magic. I had a growing list of notes about the characters, descriptions, etc that was over 7 pages alone. But I'll keep writing, don't worry and thank you all for the kind words!

drmrbludrmrbluabout 11 years ago
Only two types of computer users!

Which two types, you might ask. Those who have lost data and those who will lose data. There is no absolute way to guarantee that even your copies are safe. I have even had thumb drives go bad after only a single use -- brand new ones. It is sad to hear about the loss of so much work and planning. For some people recovery is an easy thing, for others it is nothing short of a nightmare. I just wanted to thank you for letting us share in your dreams and stories. It is also nice that you are still active as a writer and have an active imagination. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
sorry about your data

rhev, you could try downloading the recovery software from a torrent site like piratebay and try recovering your story hope this helps ;)

Show More
Share this Story

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Similar Stories

Font of Fertility Ch. 01 Jeremiah finds out about his magic dick.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
The Warlock Introducing Wilfred Tennamont.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
Home for Horny Monsters Ch. 001 Mike inherits an old house. There's a nymph in the tub!in NonHuman
Satyr Play Young Stanley Garin's first job comes with a big secret.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
The Missing Dragon An elusive fire breathing monster leads him to a new world.in Sci-Fi & Fantasy
More Stories