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"Ethan, this is Greta," Mary said instead of asking what was wrong. She knew when to push Ethan and when to not. This was a not the right moment.
Greta extended her hand and said, "Nice to meet you Ethan. I have a feeling we'll be seeing quite a bit of each other."
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- COMMENTS
erotikpassionsalmost 10 years agoI might be late in reading this but I disagree with most readers who think that Ethan should have resisted more. My take is that he had been fighting his desires for long enough and then met someone who was way ahead of him in this game. I think this happened as it should have and I also like the style of writing seen here.
lonesomedove66almost 11 years agoThere is a unanimous vote that Ethan gave it up too quickly I have to agree. One or two grammatical errors. It is painting a picture of Afton, as you put it a predator, I don't really think that is what he is. Ethan may have been having fantasies and feelings to try it out but it would have been nice for them to really sit down and talk properly. Ethan knew he was being pursued by I don't see him as being weak.
All in all a good story and I am interested to see more, but as he stated when he first met Afton, he has a girlfriend and he brought her to the party. I wonder if Mary knows more about Ethan than he realizes too??
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoDamn, where's the back story, the plot. It was like, Let's just get to the fucking, story be damned. We'll fill in the gaps later. Butt plug is preferential stretching? Of the imagination anyway.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI was disappointed that you had Ethan capitulate to Afton so quickly. You paint him as someone in denial of his sexuality. No matter how powerful or seductive Afton is, a person in TRUE denial wouldn't move that quickly. Afton should have had to work harder to get him.
Also, you misspelled 'mansion', and there were other grammatical errors as well. Need to proofread a little more. So, while the story has great potential, the flaws and the pacing only merit 4 stars.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoLoved the story and descriptive details. Hot. Hot Hot. Can't wait to read the next chapter (;
