All Comments on 'Olivia and Owen'

Thats a great story and since I am someone who has a God given gift of being able to see spirits, Your story is more real than you know. I have never had sex with a spirit but you can be sure that spirits do

This was a great story. Characters one could care about and an actual story line! You are a very talented writer. Thanks for sharing this.

It reminds me in some ways of 'Well Met By Moonlight' by beachbum1958, different yet similar, about love and sex between the living and the dead, only 'Well Met By Moonlight' is much sadder in tone, but still this story resonates with me like that one did. You have a lot of talent, please keep going

What else can I say? You made me almost want to join them there in the woods. I gave you 5 stars and wished I could give you 10. Keep up the good work!

This is the first time I've ever had more than 3000 readers before lunch on a story's first day. Thanks for reading, and for your votes, comments, and favorites!

I'm normally skeptical about ghost stories, finding them more about the supernatural than about people, who just happen to have died. But in this story, Olivia and Owen are more "alive" than most human characters and I'm glad Frank and the narrator were able to address their "bond", while helping the ghosts. Well done and romantic!

i dont even no what to say. Never read anything like that before. Very unique. Could have done with a happier ending, bu i guess im just that way

Great use of language to blend the scene, the emotions, and the actions. Thank you for sharing Olivia and Owen with us.

This is a totally unique story in my experience here. A literate and graceful telling of a tale that’s a little out there and yet not so far that I can’t almost bring it into focus. Thank you for sharing and more stories would be appreciated.

They should have shown how first then changed partners So it could have been Angie with Frank for her first time. And instead of shipping her away on Amtrak, they should be living together as the couple they want to be.

frank and angie should stay together as love each other the end made frank nothing more than a teacher prop for her to show the ghost.oliva care more about frank in the end

The number of commenters who would have preferred an ending in which Angie and Frank got to stay together is interesting to me. I admit that it would have been happier. All I can say is that the happiest possible ending is not the only possible ending. I found this ending compelling in a way the others I tried out were not--it seemed real, and in keeping with the mood of the story.

And don't forget: they all get to meet in the graveyard every week for a nice round of dream sex.

...as it is. The story was beautiful, well written and hot, really HOT! There's always a chance the lawyer may leave because he gets the feeling he's playing second fiddle and then the door is open for more Angie and Frank.

A definite palate cleanser after the slaves of New York...lc

Great story and concept. Deserves 6 stars. Thanks for the treat.