All Comments on 'Olivia's Revenge Ch. 02'

That's it?

I did like this one but, to be honest, it is not as good a Ch. 1.

Revenge has been done. Wish there was more to the story, but you did what you set out to do. Hope your next story can show room to expand. Thanks

It's like a 15 year old wrote this.

But i would like to hear Sharons point of view and her feelings about Olivia getting the "job" and her hubby Tom.

Well done I am happy now that Olivia has got not only her revenge on the bitch but a new man as a bonus. Keep on writing and ignore comments from "Anonymous" users.

Thanks for sharing. Great finish!!

My best part was how Olivia got to fall for Tom, how sweet. Nicely told, though the errors could have been avoided. They detracted a bit from the enjoyment of the story. Still, well done.

I'm about to read Sharon's point of view, but I don't see what she can say to make what she did right.

If I'm in a generous mood I might excuse her using sex to get ahead, even to the extent of cheating.

But she did two things that I can't excuse.

The first was sabotaging her supposed friend. It's one thing to enhance (pun intended) her own chances, but to screw over her friend? NO way.

Second, she treated her husband like shit. It's one thing to cheat, but you don't have to crap on your husband.

Always fun to see the office slut get her comeuppance. Clever little tale of revenge.

This last chapter really pulled the story together.

What a great story, and as a writer you are very creative and erotic. Can't wait to read all of your work.

Will

You had several choices for an ending. Using Tom to provide all the details of Sharon's affair with the boss must have entail Olivia, and the info she had on Sharon. Somehow I missed that. Good story line, but you have to get a proofreader. Some of the grammar got messed up because of spelling and missing words. Cleaned up would make it easier to read. Just a suggestion. Keep writing.

XYZ

Excellent revenge

This story was great. I wish the author kept writing.