All Comments on 'On and Off The Ice'

Totally feelin' the fantasy. Glad you continued with the story and yes that was an AWESOME series! The NHL is having their '09 awards show here in Vegas at the Palms. Some friends and I plan on hanging out there tonight to do some friendly stalking. Hope to see our favorite Kid and what would be even more awesome is if my-future-baby-daddy (a certain number 11) happened to be there too! Sigh...I can only dream. Thanks for the entertainment.

That was great, and parts really made me laugh. Max need s sequel. But can he be traded to a team with different colors? Maybe in the southeast division? he he he

I'm so glad you wrote something else to this story? Any chance of continuing it even further?? lol

Go Pens!

Awesomeness!! Please turn this in a series of ficlets!! We need more!!

If there ever was a real version of Amelia, she'd be one hell of a lucky girl.

Anyways, awesome job and you should write more!!

Is there any way I can get alerts on this website?!? Would you so kindly e-mail me if there is?

The Penguins played a hell of a series. It was a well deserved victory. However, I'm still and always will be a die hard Wings fan! As far as this "sequel" it was well written. I'm not a fan of "Sid the Kid" but I am a hockey fan and I do have my fair share of crushes. If you still haven't gotten the crush out of your system, Mugsy, I wouldn't mind another sequel. Although, I don't know where you could take Ameila and Sean from here.

I'm really enjoying this tale. Please, please, please continue. Thanks for the story & hope there'll be more.

Again, at Penn Lady's 'suggestion', I read this excellent follow up.

I love how you describe the development of their relationship and place those small stumbling blocks in their path. In particular I liked the sex scenes. They were both tender and funny and incredibly hot at the same time!

It's just so beautiful, so real about 2 people in love. Thanks for such a loving prose.

I know this is an old posting, but I just loved these two stories, or two chapters, or whatever. You really know how to bring out emotions and draw the reader into the story line and that is a gift rarely seen here.

Five stars without a doubt.

I cant stop reading your stories, only wish there were more of them!

"The Ice-ing On Top" (SC and Amelia) part 3/3:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-ice-ing-on-top

For some reason I was irritated by her behaviour. If she just wants to run away without giving notice then she is a coward and doesn't deserve you. I mean she didn't have any reason to permanently shift back to her hometown. Then why did she do it? Age difference? Then why stay with him in the first place? I think she started taking him for granted or something. Very disappointed with her though not with the story. If things like these happen in real life then god save this world. 5* for the story though!

Forced drama in a good written story is like shitting on a very good, tasty looking pizza.

Well, congratulations mate. You shat all over the pizza.