All Comments on 'On Camping Trip'

Wonderful story, with more to follow, I hope.

Your right about "outdoor sex", it really sets the scene for total abondonment of ones morals.

As a country girl, I'm all for that!!!!

I really enjoyed your very erotic description of the sexual interlude. However, I would have enjoyed it even more had you taken some time to tell us some of the things that happened between the two that led them finally to that point. These sorts of things usually evolve slowly over time, and it's very hot to read about how they develop. I'll look forward to more.